Driving In Circles

Unwelcome sight for
driver trying to leave town
a WELCOME sign 


May 22, 2020


December 24, 2020
entered in the Sencleri-Limoku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2021 at 4:48 AM

Cute one. That would be very upsetting. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Jo Chamberlain

January 1, 2021 at 3:22 AM

I get so confused, I stick to the roads I know, I let my husband do the long distance driving, he has a far better sense of direction. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Line Gauthier

September 2, 2020 at 4:11 AM

Going around in circles ~ been there done that. Well penned senryu. Bravo ~

Janice Canerdy

September 2, 2020 at 5:45 AM

Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Joseph May

May 24, 2020 at 8:22 AM

A welcome sign becomes a lost cause, Nicely done Janice

Janice Canerdy

May 24, 2020 at 9:15 AM

Thanks so much, Joseph. Before the gps came along, I spent a lot of my time LOST! Janice

Rico Leffanta

May 23, 2020 at 2:07 PM

Their are villages in England with roundabouts that invariably lead back to the roundabout of origin giving an whole new meaning to "Sunday drive"! Aloha! Rico

Janice Canerdy

May 24, 2020 at 9:15 AM

I would lose my mind there! Thanks, Rico. Janice