Driving

Driving in my blue car.
Sunny day, top is down.
Blue skies above me.
The road a blue ribbon.
Where will the wind blow me?
Music is turned up loud.
Sail ahead on a cloud.

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Viv Wigley

August 29, 2016 at 7:46 PM

Deserted Irish country lanes, and you go and lose your car? I'll send you another pic, or you can send me your current one, Jean x

Jean Murray

August 30, 2016 at 1:40 AM

If you could only see me here typing with two fingers Viv, you would have an inkling of how computer illiterate I am. Almost as bas as my spellling skills. OK....let's do it again !!

Paul Callus

August 29, 2016 at 11:32 AM

This is lively and lovely as it is, Jean! It might not be a Pleiades, but an enjoyable poem all the same! ~ Regards // paul

Jean Murray

August 29, 2016 at 4:06 PM

Thank you for saying so Paul. I kinda like it myself.

Viv Wigley

August 29, 2016 at 6:45 AM

I assume it's the car top that is down, jean, and you're not getting an even tan. Sounds like a lovely way to spend a sunny day, westbound on Cluain Ard with a bit of Bruce Springsteen on the auld Blaupunkt Cassette. Oh, hang on, that's me.... Viv x

Jean Murray

August 29, 2016 at 3:06 PM

After all that compressing Viv.....Check out my new bubble car! I've lost the new one I downloaded.

Jean Murray

August 29, 2016 at 7:17 AM

Viv I have just realised.....although there are 6 syllables per line, only the first one starts with D. So, it's back to the drawing board for me!!