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Driveway Rainbows

Soft rain had blurred the lines Softened the edges Frizzed the sharpness Of artistic angst Smiles drooped, fingers grew thinner, somehow reaching out. The eyes caught the raindrops Blinked them into dappled blues Noses spread in humor's humidity Glasses sliding from their tips They would all leave Float away on a Chalky rainbow river Leaving us to wonder Where do they go? John G. Lawless ©7/17/2023

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Date: 7/17/2023 8:07:00 PM
Now you've got me pondering away furiously an curiously. Nice touch, John!
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Date: 7/17/2023 7:44:00 PM
John, you are a master of making poetry out of ordinary experiences by the power of your imagination. Just bloody marvellous.... The eyes caught the raindrops Blinked them into dappled blues This is what poetry is about, making things fresh and alive.
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