Driven

  
      Colors of sunsets 
        Artists cannot match

      Yet we try anyway
         ~ our itch to scratch

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sara Etgen-Baker

December 20, 2025 at 6:34 PM

we don't possess God's palette -- which makes writing poetry tough :-)

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2025 at 7:39 PM

Yes. But within the limits of whatever measure talent we're given, let us do our best to walk in His ways. What else can we say? ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

December 20, 2025 at 4:11 PM

Finding just the right paint isn’t easy…it’s new every day! Happy Hanukkah!

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2025 at 7:40 PM

Paint is new; and we're getting old. Oh, well... Thanks for the Hanukah wishes, Kim. Seasons' Best, Gershon

John Lawless

December 20, 2025 at 5:47 AM

Alas the folly of trying to capture a moment of eternity.....

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2025 at 7:53 PM

Kind of like catching butterflies with boxing gloves.

Joseph P. DiMino

December 20, 2025 at 5:19 AM

If we try to outshine God, we will always be disappointed. We celebrate our striving...the frustration we share. Admire the other's attempt to bridge the Divine Gap. As long as we think that God does not need our input, to manage creation, separate ourselves from God's everyday process...we will have inferiority complexes.

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2025 at 8:00 PM

Aw, you've taken me too seriously, I think, Joe. Season's best, Gershon