Driven

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i hear the ticking of the clock it's in my head and in my heart the pulse of life doubtlessly finite so many things i want to do the tic toc getting louder it echoes in my brain rummaging through images and dreams while time rings evermore elusive i get up in the morning determined with a yearning to break free driven to spark the momentum for the many things i want to do

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Yellow Rose

Date: 6/19/2025 2:42:00 PM

your words spoke to me! I seem to wake up with a sense of urgency every day. Time, as you say, is elusive; and I, like others, don't seem to have quite enough of it.