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Drive Me Crazy

Drive me crazy do your thing Tear my heart out and eat it No let’s start again Drive me crazy do your thing Sink your teeth into peaches No still not right Drive me crazy do your thing Pout your lips and look at me Getting there Lust is primal in the eye Bedazzles a head like An electric shock Flesh it speaks Mind it’s locked Rapacious! Drive me crazy for a while.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/10/2010 1:59:00 PM
YOu are going a bit crazy with this one, I see. Yeah, that Cromwell was not so nice either, but nobody deserves their neck chopped several times with a dull blade before it actually goes thru. gruesome! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:58:00 PM
Hot Hot Hot David and u must have had some potent subject matter to concentrate on when writing such a passionate piece like this... a man who knows what he wants and enjoys it too... those peaches must be ripe and ready to go... now this is from the "Sweetheart" who is always dipping back to her roots... passion and luv ... in poetry and life...luv..u might like to read ...belle' amore... it might take the edge off ...or add to it...haha...
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Date: 5/10/2010 11:52:00 AM
Electrifying is the only way to describe crazy passion that has a will of its own....brilliant writing Davie. Mahalo for your remarks on my poetry. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:32:00 AM
Verypassionate poem, David! Enjoyed reading it today! And thank you for your comment! Have a nice week...Gert
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Date: 5/9/2010 11:15:00 PM
If someone inspires romantic poetry like this, I hope they "drive you crazy" for more than just a while. What a wonderful statement of your passion, David! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2010 10:19:00 PM
Passionate poem,excellent verses.Charma
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Date: 5/9/2010 7:13:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed this one lol
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