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Dripping Old Man

In Christmas this old man thought time was good To drink pints of beer as much as he could Went to sleep after last sip He couldn’t foresee he’d soon drip Didn’t wear diaper, return to babyhood. ________________ November 17, 2022 Syllable count : 10 10 7 7 10 (HMS) Rhyme checked at rhymezone.com Contest : A Fun Holiday Limerick Sponsored by : Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/27/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Tania for the placement.
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Date: 11/24/2022 10:42:00 AM
Subimal, a creative one, congratulations on your winning placement!
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