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Drip Drip Drip

water drips slowly
large puddle forms on ground
birds splash playfully

For S.K.A.T.'s picture perfect Haiku contest.
I managed to snag the last spot.

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2015

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Bl Devnath Date: 7/17/2015 4:38:00 PM Picture is perfect visualized with a natural scene beautifully. Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Darlene Gifford Date: 7/13/2015 6:25:00 PM Congrats, Richard on your top win and thanks for reading my poem. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/13/2015 7:35:00 PM Thanks Darlene, you painted a wonderful picture with such few words.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/2/2015 12:16:00 AM captured a beautiful picture with just three lines, enjoyed your haiku.. good luck on the contest:) *luv, p.d. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/13/2015 7:36:00 PM Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the congrats.

Joseph May Date: 6/26/2015 9:51:00 PM Nice haiku.. Congrats on your win... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/26/2015 11:29:00 PM Thanks Joseph.

Arthur Vaso Date: 6/26/2015 7:53:00 PM I see this for what it really is, a plea for me to write another Financial Investment poem!! Loved this by the way! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/26/2015 8:57:00 PM ;0)

Edward Ebbs Date: 6/25/2015 8:49:00 PM Nice...congrats! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/26/2015 7:05:00 AM Thanks Ed

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/25/2015 8:41:00 PM hey, I am seeing that you got a first place. Wow, nothing like "the last shall be first!!!" Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 8:48:00 PM Ha ha, ha I guess it worked out.

Kp Nunez Date: 6/25/2015 7:57:00 PM You have snagged more than the last spot, you got the first place, adhered to the demands of a traditional haiku, but satisfied SKAT's exacting requirement for a picture perfect haiku. Congratulations, Rick! hugs! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 8:48:00 PM Thanks Kim!:0)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/25/2015 6:59:00 PM I love the vivid imagery your haiku expresses Richard. I adore watching birds enjoying a bird bath. Kudos on your wonderful win! I am thrilled to share the top spot with you and Carrie as I admire both of your poetry. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 7:53:00 PM Thanks Connie, you are sweet.

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/25/2015 11:21:00 AM Richard, a really good haiku paints a vivid picture. Your certainly does this! Congratulation on your MUCH-deserved win. Janice Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 7:54:00 PM Thanks Janice.

Paul Callus Date: 6/25/2015 11:01:00 AM So, a mad dash to the winning post it has been! Congratulations, Richard, much deserved. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 7:54:00 PM Thanks Paul.

Constance La France Date: 6/25/2015 10:24:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful placement with this beautyRichard congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 7:55:00 PM Thanks Constance.

Carrie Richards Date: 6/25/2015 10:16:00 AM It doesn't take much, to find a bit of fun !! Love this !! Congratulations, Richard! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 7:56:00 PM I imagined this scene in a street in the middle of New York City.

Casarah Nance Date: 6/25/2015 9:07:00 AM Such an innocent and fun view to witness ;) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 9:11:00 AM Thanks Casarah.

Judy Konos Date: 6/25/2015 7:02:00 AM T'aint it The Truth! Congratulations Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 8:33:00 AM Thanks Judy.

Darlene Gifford Date: 6/25/2015 6:05:00 AM Loved your Haiku, Richard, and congrats on your big win. ~~Darlene Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 6:53:00 AM Thanks Darlene, it was a pleasant surprise.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/25/2015 3:52:00 AM lovely picture Rick congrats on win hugs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 6:54:00 AM Hi Shadow, thanks. How did you make out on your contest conundrum?

Alexis Y. Date: 6/25/2015 2:40:00 AM Richard,this is a nice haiku.Congrats on your big win:) Alexis Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 6:55:00 AM Thanks Alexis.

Skat A Date: 6/25/2015 1:25:00 AM Richard, I'm glad you managed to snag a spot. :) Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT** Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/25/2015 6:56:00 AM I am too, thanks for picking this one.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/24/2015 3:29:00 AM Weee how cute are the birds playing!!=)~Olive Eloisa Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/24/2015 8:55:00 AM Thanks Olive.

Constance La France Date: 6/23/2015 8:49:00 PM Richard, such a beautiful visual you have created 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/24/2015 8:56:00 AM Thanks for he visit and seven Constance.

Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/23/2015 7:05:00 PM Nice Rick... Verlena Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/24/2015 8:57:00 AM Thanks Verlena.

David Meade Date: 6/23/2015 12:40:00 PM water and the celebration of life -- bird dancing gives us joy. Nicely done Richard. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/23/2015 7:00:00 PM Thanks David.

Jill Spagnola Date: 6/23/2015 12:34:00 PM If that took you 3 seconds then the image must have already been floating in your brain :) I'm eager to read a 5 second poem of yours! ~jill Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/23/2015 7:01:00 PM I never know what is going to come out of this brain. Thanks for visiting.

Jill Spagnola Date: 6/23/2015 12:31:00 PM You paint such a beautiful image in so few words, just lovely :), jill Login to Reply

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