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Drip Drip Drip

water drips slowly
large puddle forms on ground
birds splash playfully

For S.K.A.T.'s picture perfect Haiku contest.
I managed to snag the last spot.

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Bl Devnath

July 17, 2015 at 4:38 PM

Picture is perfect visualized with a natural scene beautifully. Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Darlene Gifford

July 13, 2015 at 6:25 PM

Congrats, Richard on your top win and thanks for reading my poem.

Richard Lamoureux

July 13, 2015 at 7:35 PM

Thanks Darlene, you painted a wonderful picture with such few words.

Poet Destroyer A

July 2, 2015 at 12:16 AM

captured a beautiful picture with just three lines, enjoyed your haiku.. good luck on the contest:) *luv, p.d.

Richard Lamoureux

July 13, 2015 at 7:36 PM

Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the congrats.

Joseph May

June 26, 2015 at 9:51 PM

Nice haiku.. Congrats on your win...

Richard Lamoureux

June 26, 2015 at 11:29 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Arthur Vaso

June 26, 2015 at 7:53 PM

I see this for what it really is, a plea for me to write another Financial Investment poem!! Loved this by the way!

Richard Lamoureux

June 26, 2015 at 8:57 PM

;0)

Edward Ebbs

June 25, 2015 at 8:49 PM

Nice...congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

June 26, 2015 at 7:05 AM

Thanks Ed

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 8:41 PM

hey, I am seeing that you got a first place. Wow, nothing like "the last shall be first!!!"

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:48 PM

Ha ha, ha I guess it worked out.

Kp Nunez

June 25, 2015 at 7:57 PM

You have snagged more than the last spot, you got the first place, adhered to the demands of a traditional haiku, but satisfied SKAT's exacting requirement for a picture perfect haiku. Congratulations, Rick! hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:48 PM

Thanks Kim!:0)

Connie Marcum Wong

June 25, 2015 at 6:59 PM

I love the vivid imagery your haiku expresses Richard. I adore watching birds enjoying a bird bath. Kudos on your wonderful win! I am thrilled to share the top spot with you and Carrie as I admire both of your poetry.

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:53 PM

Thanks Connie, you are sweet.

Janice Canerdy

June 25, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Richard, a really good haiku paints a vivid picture. Your certainly does this! Congratulation on your MUCH-deserved win. Janice

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:54 PM

Thanks Janice.

Paul Callus

June 25, 2015 at 11:01 AM

So, a mad dash to the winning post it has been! Congratulations, Richard, much deserved.

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:54 PM

Thanks Paul.

Constance La France

June 25, 2015 at 10:24 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful placement with this beautyRichard congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:55 PM

Thanks Constance.

Carrie Richards

June 25, 2015 at 10:16 AM

It doesn't take much, to find a bit of fun !! Love this !! Congratulations, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:56 PM

I imagined this scene in a street in the middle of New York City.

Casarah Nance

June 25, 2015 at 9:07 AM

Such an innocent and fun view to witness ;)

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 9:11 AM

Thanks Casarah.

Judy Konos

June 25, 2015 at 7:02 AM

T'aint it The Truth! Congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:33 AM

Thanks Judy.

Darlene Gifford

June 25, 2015 at 6:05 AM

Loved your Haiku, Richard, and congrats on your big win. ~~Darlene

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 6:53 AM

Thanks Darlene, it was a pleasant surprise.

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 3:52 AM

lovely picture Rick congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 6:54 AM

Hi Shadow, thanks. How did you make out on your contest conundrum?

Alexis Y.

June 25, 2015 at 2:40 AM

Richard,this is a nice haiku.Congrats on your big win:) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 6:55 AM

Thanks Alexis.

Skat A

June 25, 2015 at 1:25 AM

Richard, I'm glad you managed to snag a spot. :) Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 6:56 AM

I am too, thanks for picking this one.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 24, 2015 at 3:29 AM

Weee how cute are the birds playing!!=)~Olive Eloisa

Richard Lamoureux

June 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM

Thanks Olive.

Constance La France

June 23, 2015 at 8:49 PM

Richard, such a beautiful visual you have created 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Richard Lamoureux

June 24, 2015 at 8:56 AM

Thanks for he visit and seven Constance.

Verlena S. Walker

June 23, 2015 at 7:05 PM

Nice Rick... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

June 24, 2015 at 8:57 AM

Thanks Verlena.

David Meade

June 23, 2015 at 12:40 PM

water and the celebration of life -- bird dancing gives us joy. Nicely done Richard.

Richard Lamoureux

June 23, 2015 at 7:00 PM

Thanks David.

Jill Spagnola

June 23, 2015 at 12:34 PM

If that took you 3 seconds then the image must have already been floating in your brain :) I'm eager to read a 5 second poem of yours! ~jill

Richard Lamoureux

June 23, 2015 at 7:01 PM

I never know what is going to come out of this brain. Thanks for visiting.

Jill Spagnola

June 23, 2015 at 12:31 PM

You paint such a beautiful image in so few words, just lovely :), jill

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