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Drip Drip Drip

water drips slowly large puddle forms on ground birds splash playfully For S.K.A.T.'s picture perfect Haiku contest. I managed to snag the last spot.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/17/2015 4:38:00 PM

Picture is perfect visualized with a natural scene beautifully. Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/13/2015 6:25:00 PM

Congrats, Richard on your top win and thanks for reading my poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2015 7:35:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, you painted a wonderful picture with such few words.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 12:16:00 AM

captured a beautiful picture with just three lines, enjoyed your haiku.. good luck on the contest:) *luv, p.d.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/13/2015 7:36:00 PM

Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the congrats.

Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2015 9:51:00 PM

Nice haiku.. Congrats on your win...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2015 11:29:00 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/26/2015 7:53:00 PM

I see this for what it really is, a plea for me to write another Financial Investment poem!! Loved this by the way!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2015 8:57:00 PM

;0)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 6/25/2015 8:49:00 PM

Nice...congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2015 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Ed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 8:41:00 PM

hey, I am seeing that you got a first place. Wow, nothing like "the last shall be first!!!"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 8:48:00 PM

Ha ha, ha I guess it worked out.

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/25/2015 7:57:00 PM

You have snagged more than the last spot, you got the first place, adhered to the demands of a traditional haiku, but satisfied SKAT's exacting requirement for a picture perfect haiku. Congratulations, Rick! hugs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 8:48:00 PM

Thanks Kim!:0)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2015 6:59:00 PM

I love the vivid imagery your haiku expresses Richard. I adore watching birds enjoying a bird bath. Kudos on your wonderful win! I am thrilled to share the top spot with you and Carrie as I admire both of your poetry.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 7:53:00 PM

Thanks Connie, you are sweet.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/25/2015 11:21:00 AM

Richard, a really good haiku paints a vivid picture. Your certainly does this! Congratulation on your MUCH-deserved win. Janice

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 7:54:00 PM

Thanks Janice.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2015 11:01:00 AM

So, a mad dash to the winning post it has been! Congratulations, Richard, much deserved.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 7:54:00 PM

Thanks Paul.

Constance La France

Date: 6/25/2015 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful placement with this beautyRichard congratulations on your placement with this beautiful write

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 7:55:00 PM

Thanks Constance.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2015 10:16:00 AM

It doesn't take much, to find a bit of fun !! Love this !! Congratulations, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 7:56:00 PM

I imagined this scene in a street in the middle of New York City.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/25/2015 9:07:00 AM

Such an innocent and fun view to witness ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thanks Casarah.

Judy Konos

Date: 6/25/2015 7:02:00 AM

T'aint it The Truth! Congratulations

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Judy.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/25/2015 6:05:00 AM

Loved your Haiku, Richard, and congrats on your big win. ~~Darlene

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 6:53:00 AM

Thanks Darlene, it was a pleasant surprise.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 3:52:00 AM

lovely picture Rick congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 6:54:00 AM

Hi Shadow, thanks. How did you make out on your contest conundrum?

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/25/2015 2:40:00 AM

Richard,this is a nice haiku.Congrats on your big win:) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 6:55:00 AM

Thanks Alexis.

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:25:00 AM

Richard, I'm glad you managed to snag a spot. :) Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/25/2015 6:56:00 AM

I am too, thanks for picking this one.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/24/2015 3:29:00 AM

Weee how cute are the birds playing!!=)~Olive Eloisa

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Olive.

Constance La France

Date: 6/23/2015 8:49:00 PM

Richard, such a beautiful visual you have created 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for he visit and seven Constance.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/23/2015 7:05:00 PM

Nice Rick... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Verlena.

David Meade

Date: 6/23/2015 12:40:00 PM

water and the celebration of life -- bird dancing gives us joy. Nicely done Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2015 7:00:00 PM

Thanks David.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/23/2015 12:34:00 PM

If that took you 3 seconds then the image must have already been floating in your brain :) I'm eager to read a 5 second poem of yours! ~jill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2015 7:01:00 PM

I never know what is going to come out of this brain. Thanks for visiting.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/23/2015 12:31:00 PM

You paint such a beautiful image in so few words, just lovely :), jill