Drinking Delight

Jerry Lamb from Alabam
Drank soda from a can,
He used a straw
To make the draw,
He really is a soda fan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Just saw the way your responded to a Big foot poem of someone named Franklin. that was so sweet the way you encouraged him. I really like this one of yours. I noticed you have many limericks. Can't wait to read more! But work beckons me to get off the computer and get out the door~~ it's so great seeing a prolific limerick writer here.
Williams Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for your lovely comments. As for Franlin he absolutely deserved it, what a terrific write. As for being a prolic limerick writer, i only wrote my first limerick ever about 9 weeks ago. There is a man that just wrote his first one. His name is Lindsay Laurie. He is an incredible writer, so watch for his limericks....John
Laurie Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:13 PM
There you go John; good advice with the straw for kids down this way. Those European wasps have a habit of inviting themselves into cans for a drink. Regards - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Hello again Lindsay, I am glad my advice may save a few nasty situations occurring down your way. As always thank you for reading my poems, it is appreciated. Kind regards----John
Hopper Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Cute limerick
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Anna--here's drinking to you----soda that is------kind regards----John
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 5:56 AM
aww cute limerick:-) Hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Jan, Especially written for children. Another one later tonight for the children again. Thanks for stopping by and your lovely comment. ...kind regards-----John
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