William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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*1st Place*
A Simple Pleasure
~Julia Ward: Judged 2023 February 15

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Drinking a Cup of Tea

*Image of Royal Alberts by Antiques And Teacups.

Drinking a Cup of Tea

An outing drizzling visits two,
walking past a depot.
Dashing through the rain they withdrew,
in a dressed gazebo.

Fine Albert's Country Rose teacups,
set on top matching plates.
Buttered toast and biscuit warmups,
a quaint morning translates.

Orange pekoe redolent blends,
blissful sip indulges,
chews, nibbles, and napkin wipe trends,
engaging divulges.

Taste spirits chatter that transcends,
ere squall is forgotten,
decency trades a storm extends,
a spot of tea brought in.

2023 February 04

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Linda Alice Fowler February 16, 2023 at 7:06 AM I feel as though I have one of those cups in my hand William. I do so like tea, and foofaraw on occasion :) Very nicely penned! Congratulations on your top win! :) William Kelii Kekaula February 16, 2023 at 8:41 AM When I sold moms Honolulu house, there were other priceless things that went missing when I moved back to California. Filed complaints to Hawaii and California officials and the BBB. Somewhat glad to know that that year, they're no longer in business--but, it also meant that I wouldn't be able to further recoup my losses, c'est la vie mon amie. William Kelii Kekaula February 16, 2023 at 8:31 AM When she passed, I sold most of moms things, including her Rosewood Glass China Cabinet, but sadly lost her complete 12-pc set of the Prince Albert's, the complete 12-pc set of the Blue Dutch Boy Porcelain, and her Waterford crystals, and complete silver--utensils, 2 candelabras, coffeepot set, tea set, and the punchbowl set. All from that lit-up China cabinet which the movers in Calif. paid $400 per contract! Thanks, Linda. Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman February 15, 2023 at 10:26 AM William, back with congratulations for your trophy win! I nave collected teacups for many years to give to my granddaughter when she turns eighteen. Blessings my friend. William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2023 at 12:39 PM Thanks again for your wealth of extolling, Sam, it's greatly appreciated, more so, being the second time around, Aloha, William

Anisha Dutta February 15, 2023 at 8:49 AM A quaint morning translates… decency trades… a spot of tea brought in … Your picture is descent and similar the composition. Felt happy to see you on TOP. Blessings always William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2023 at 8:55 AM Your highlights hint at an accepting smile, Anisha, many thanks indeed, as your thoughtfulness is greatly appreciated, Aloha, William

Regina Mcintosh February 15, 2023 at 2:00 AM Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2023 at 4:26 AM Blessings constant your course, Gina, as love answers Grace, Aloha, William

Beata Agustin February 15, 2023 at 1:24 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2023 at 4:22 AM You are the 'Wow,' in this equation, Beata, I thank you, Aloha, William

Julia Ward February 15, 2023 at 12:52 AM A well-deserved top position in my contest. Well done, William. William Kelii Kekaula February 15, 2023 at 1:22 AM Truly honored, Julia, and pleased with your supportive expressions. Thank you, my friend, Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman February 9, 2023 at 5:42 PM A true shelter from the storm found in a beautiful teacup! Just "tea-lightful" William! Blessings and best wishes for the contest. Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula February 9, 2023 at 6:04 PM Liking the wordplay, Sam, and both your expressions and encouragement is a spirited high, Aloha William

W J Clarke February 6, 2023 at 3:42 PM Really delightful William. Just my cup of tea. I love a good afternoon tea with scones, jam and clotted cream :-) William Kelii Kekaula February 6, 2023 at 9:14 PM An entertaining share, WJ, and welcoming thought, Aloha William

Sotto Poet February 5, 2023 at 6:11 AM Your picture depicts a gorgeous scene—a spectacularly appropriate tea gathering. The same may be said of your poetry, which is just as sophisticated as your pictures. William Kelii Kekaula February 5, 2023 at 8:07 AM Lasaad, your supportive expressions, constants pleasure with no end, and your presence is met exceedingly with joy, Aloha William

Vijay Pandit February 5, 2023 at 5:49 AM Your photo is a delightful sight--a royal tea time! And so is your poem--elegant as the photo. William Kelii Kekaula February 5, 2023 at 8:03 AM I'm more than pleased, Vijay, for your visit, and I enjoy reading your fine assessments, thank you, my friend, Aloha William