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Drifting Through the Stars

Looking at the Milky Way, I know I am far, far from the high way, I left and you are. I, for once should have known, the ride and the drift, cause by what you have shown, be no voyage so swift. Now that I could touch the dazzling stars you gaze, should I paint a nebular without the scars of your face? With a stargazer shining through your hair, that waves across the universe blown by air. My senses frozen, my soul feather light, I feel slow motion, swimming in aurora at night. Gently thinking, how shall I do it right to rise knowing, I am your white knight. When all the black holes vanish or die, should I unfreeze my senses and fly, to earth you never said me goodbye, and show you what I painted in the sky.

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Date: 2/26/2016 4:27:00 PM
Hasan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:49:00 PM
Hasan, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:42:00 AM
Hasan, well penned. Enjoyed reading this poem... Verlena
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Hasan Hilmy
Date: 8/29/2014 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 6:22:00 PM
Hi Hasan, this is such a deep powerful write that is very beautiful. The imagery is amazing! Well done. I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita
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Date: 8/28/2014 10:48:00 AM
Hasan- Quite a lovely poem and love the imagery. I soared reading it. Swimming in aurora at night sounds magical!!!!! Swim away!!!:-) Christine
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Christine Costello... Imagine how it would feel like swimming in aurora and drifting the north wind ;-)

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