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Drifting Thoughts

Drifting Thoughts Today I fed a duck. He dined alone, gluten free diet, no bread for him. Watched a squirrel bury an acorn only to have it stolen by a stalker from another tree. At the pond the Osprey caught more fish than I did. Offered my SPF 50 lotion to the sunbathing turtles. Laughed out loud alone, kayak drifting, on the whims of rippling winds. Got stuck in traffic amid the impatient honking of the Geese. Quietly applauded the artistic posing of the Swans. Played the shape game with passing clouds. Lost track of time and time lost track of me. John G. Lawless 8/8/2016

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Date: 8/10/2016 10:41:00 PM
just came across your note to me. (I don't get notification) Anyway I LOVE how you came up with a wonderful poem like this one after being right out there doing such a relaxing thing in nature.
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Date: 8/9/2016 3:59:00 PM
I don't know if you wrote this for any contest or what it means but it is WaY COOL. BIG SEVEN
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John Lawless
Date: 8/9/2016 9:23:00 PM
No particular contest. I just spent 4-5 hours kayaking and fishing and watching the goings on around me. Thanks for the high mark.
Date: 8/8/2016 9:50:00 PM
Love your creative observations of nature around you...your comparisons and contrasts are unusual and fun!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/9/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Laura, it was a great day. the greatest comedy is watching me get out of the kayak.

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