Drifting Out To Sea

Kisses caressed her like tides do the shore
   Waves of passion touched her lips ~
            Drifting her out to sea

 9-4-2021
 Kimo Form Old Or New Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Constance La France
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Dutta Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 4:03 AM
EXCELLENT. I appreciate and admire. Best wishes and Congrats.
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September 22, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Congrats. Wonderful poem. God bless you. Love, Gina
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September 8, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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September 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Thank you for my placement Constance
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 10:22 AM
A beautiful romantic write liking the passion to this poem. love phyl
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September 9, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Phyllis
Nicole Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Oh my, a wonderful feeling indeed, being in "Waves of passion" ... again and again. Such a kiss will leave you in absolute bliss. This is so dreamy and romantic. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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September 9, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Brandy :)
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September 7, 2021 at 5:29 PM
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May Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Mo, I will check into that
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September 7, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Enjoyed your winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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September 7, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Sara
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September 7, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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September 7, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Beata
Ball Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Oh lovely Joseph. Well Said. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB
May Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Judy
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 8:06 AM
A poignant beauty! Congrats, Joseph
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September 6, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Fenn Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 9:12 PM
How beautiful!
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September 6, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Thank you Jennifer
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:40 PM
an absolute gem Joseph, adding this to my faves, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 6, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Jan, Thanks for making it a fave
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Brilliant. Congratulations.
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September 6, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Marilene
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September 5, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Beautiful, Joseph!
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September 5, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thank you Kim
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 12:16 PM
This is so nice and peaceful Joseph! Well done :)
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September 4, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Heidi..
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September 4, 2021 at 10:37 AM
WoW! Joseph, Good entry for the contest. Your title caught my attention; however, your content was totally unexpected in a good way. I found it passionate and romantic. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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September 4, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much Alexis, Have a great weekend
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September 4, 2021 at 8:55 AM
She seems ready to give up her life. Great imagery.
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September 4, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Victor
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:15 AM
love this romantic write
May Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Jack
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