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Drifting into the Man Cave

tired of his violent program turns off, un-reclines, stands up scent of perfume drifts down stairs turns on love station

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Silent One

Date: 3/2/2024 7:36:00 AM

My bedroom is my man cave lol... i do have an outdoor shed, but its too cold some times.. nice dodoitsu...

Bill Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 5:06:00 PM

Didn't confuse me, Kim, and it wouldn't matter what was on the T.V. LOL Thanks for this short but sweet, treat. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2024 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 3:21:00 PM

proud of you for escaping the turmoil and escaping into a place of calm. Liked the title as well. Perfect. enjoy your evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2024 4:09:00 PM

No, hubby is watching t.v. In man cave. The scent of perfume brings him upstairs ;) but I see how you got to that conclusion, thanks, Sara!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/1/2024 12:41:00 PM

Well written Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2024 4:10:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/1/2024 6:06:00 AM

Dear Kim, I love how you encapsulate a decisive moment of transition and escape from the chaos of daily life into a space of calm and love. The contrast between the tiredness and violence of the outside world and the soothing scent of perfume and love station creates quite the image of seeking solace and peace. A wonderful and evocative piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2024 11:22:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel! Blessings!

Tom Woody

Date: 3/1/2024 6:00:00 AM

I can definitely relate, though I don't watch much TV. But wherever she is, that's where I want to be, even if it means watching a (gasp) Hallmark movie with her

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2024 11:23:00 AM

Aww..so sweet, Tom!