Drifting In Decaying Grey

I'm awake, but where A decaying grey surround I'm floating, I drift My soul, swallowed by the breeze What of me now, diminishes .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

De La Luna Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Ah I could sense your words concretely, James! Strongly emotive write!
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Ahh!! I feel a sadness in these lines..Very emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Ohh you are into your deep dark phase today James -The imagery reminded me of dad's funeral Of course it could have been 50 shades of grey I guess lol. Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:17 PM
tragic way to leave life when one is dawned to hopelessness and helplessness.. but i hope we will not be like that as it is only breeze... breeze maybe blown away with a stronger natural force...//olive eloisa
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace