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Drifting In Decaying Grey

I'm awake, but where A decaying grey surround I'm floating, I drift My soul, swallowed by the breeze What of me now, diminishes .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 8:41:00 PM
Ah I could sense your words concretely, James! Strongly emotive write!
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Date: 3/7/2015 3:25:00 PM
Ahh!! I feel a sadness in these lines..Very emotive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/6/2015 3:14:00 PM
Ohh you are into your deep dark phase today James -The imagery reminded me of dad's funeral Of course it could have been 50 shades of grey I guess lol. Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:17:00 PM
tragic way to leave life when one is dawned to hopelessness and helplessness.. but i hope we will not be like that as it is only breeze... breeze maybe blown away with a stronger natural force...//olive eloisa
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