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Drifting Dream

Build me a sandcastle of drifting dream, just to scatter every particle in the wind... Lay me under the burden of brokenness, until the shore gives in to a new dream. ~Ayesh

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Date: 4/13/2025 5:16:00 PM
Hey kiddo nice free verse. I'm soooo ready for my new dream
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 4/13/2025 5:31:00 PM
Hello Tom, so kind of you to say that. Thank you. Hope you have been doing well. I am so excited to read your poetry soon.

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