Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Drifting Aimlessly

on the wings
of autumn's wind
my mind drifts
into the arms
of you

i lose myself
in the depths
of thoughts
as i drift
aimlessly 
through
dreams

into the arms
of you
my mind drifts
on the wings
of autumn's wind


a collaboration with Line Gauthier

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Brenda Chiri November 24, 2019 at 2:58 AM This was very nice sandy! You and line write well together!:) Sandra Adams November 24, 2019 at 1:47 PM thank you so much :)

John Gondolf November 21, 2019 at 11:03 AM A beautiful collaboration, Sandy, I like the way you repeated your thoughts in the first and last stanza but in reverse order. All the best. Hugs, John Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 11:16 AM That was Line's idea, thank you so much John... hugs

Chris Green November 21, 2019 at 6:59 AM A poem that makes it easy to drift aimlessly through your words...both of you. What a wonderful collaboration you have shared with us. Such a seamless work of art from two fantastic poets. Bravo Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 11:15 AM Thank you so much my friend....Good Afternoon...drifting is always fun in my opinion :) hugs

Vijay Pandit November 21, 2019 at 6:23 AM Well coordinated collaboration Sandy--I like how the first and last stanza complement each other..succinct--well done. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 11:14 AM Thank you so very much Vijay, that was Lines idea :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux November 20, 2019 at 11:57 PM Sounds like a good way to travel. Hugs Rick. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 11:14 AM Thank you so much Rick...traveling in dreams is always free :) hugs

Na Na November 20, 2019 at 11:55 PM Hi Sandra another masterpiece of love and emotion. Thanks for sharing this Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 11:13 AM Thank you so much :)