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Drifting Aimlessly

on the wings of autumn's wind my mind drifts into the arms of you i lose myself in the depths of thoughts as i drift aimlessly through dreams into the arms of you my mind drifts on the wings of autumn's wind a collaboration with Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/24/2019 2:58:00 AM
This was very nice sandy! You and line write well together!:)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2019 1:47:00 PM
thank you so much :)
Date: 11/21/2019 11:03:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration, Sandy, I like the way you repeated your thoughts in the first and last stanza but in reverse order. All the best. Hugs, John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 11:16:00 AM
That was Line's idea, thank you so much John... hugs
Date: 11/21/2019 6:59:00 AM
A poem that makes it easy to drift aimlessly through your words...both of you. What a wonderful collaboration you have shared with us. Such a seamless work of art from two fantastic poets. Bravo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend....Good Afternoon...drifting is always fun in my opinion :) hugs
Date: 11/21/2019 6:23:00 AM
Well coordinated collaboration Sandy--I like how the first and last stanza complement each other..succinct--well done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much Vijay, that was Lines idea :) hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 11:57:00 PM
Sounds like a good way to travel. Hugs Rick.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick...traveling in dreams is always free :) hugs
Date: 11/20/2019 11:55:00 PM
Hi Sandra another masterpiece of love and emotion. Thanks for sharing this
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much :)

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