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different drumbeats, separate Lives he inhales the wind song a static cling to yesterday held in his heart until his melody fades life, love, hope circle the drain aging realist at one with his pain love’s last aria melancholy oboe resigns with setting sun when two are no longer one chasm widens between haunting roars tribal drums on opposite shores

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/29/2011 4:59:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 8:00:00 PM
A sad one, but very well crafted, Carolyn. Congrats on your deserved win in this contest. I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/9/2011 5:32:00 AM
Incredible emotional depths. Many congrats on your WIN, with this sensational Free Verse, Carolyn, Lainie
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Date: 6/8/2011 6:07:00 PM
"a static cling to yesterday" wonderful imagery and emotion! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:52:00 PM
my congrats for hitting the charts with this poignant write..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations Carloyn on your worthy poem's feature on "Contempory American Voices." Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/6/2010 10:21:00 PM
So Sad So True.......... Love Roger x
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:45:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your first round success here! All the best of luck and happiness. Tom
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Date: 6/1/2010 12:38:00 AM
Excellent..... Congrats on the place in round 1.....:JP]
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Date: 5/6/2010 4:13:00 PM
Wow, Carolyn!...Don't know how I managed to miss THIS beauty from you!...The first and last line introduce and conclude this poem perfectly...beautiful words and flow!...'Circle the drain' is my favorite line - Tim
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Date: 5/6/2010 9:21:00 AM
You are quite a writer. Congrats on a well deserved feature. Vince
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations carolyn on your beautiful poem feature this week, My friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week Carolyn...This is a soft pensive work, well done...Margaret
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:32:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature and share with us all.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 1:22:00 PM
wow. i enjoyed this. intense real yet very soft. relationships are never ending, always redefining themselves - it's tought sometimes to keep up! thank you, chuck
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Date: 5/3/2010 1:20:00 PM
Carolyn, I missed this beautiful poem and so glad I saw it featured. Congratulations! Your words are profound and poignant. This is going into my fav. folder. Love, Connie
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:33:00 AM
Carolyn - many congrats on yet another one of your amazing piece being featured. Love Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Carolyn and a wonderful week. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 12:30:00 AM
Very wistful words,like the presentation of these couplets Carolyn.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:20:00 PM
your line on when two are no longer one is a very deep way to express.no matter how much you try not drifting apart, the other will only allow a silence and the unspoken words will grow until one day everything must be forgotten in order to be mended, or the other will just break, and realize, what was done was never worth it. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:58:00 PM
I think I read this a while back. I loved it then and I love it now. Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:01:00 AM
Carolyn, this is art of rarest beauty. Quite a gem indeed. I love this ... form (style), cadence (magic), the depth of the contents ... superb. Thanks for always being there for me. One love.
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest Carolyn. Love,Carol
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