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DRIFTING

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ green reeds softly sway sunlight paints the willow trees cares drift, fall away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 20, 2025 at 11:36 PM
So, sweet anthem of the fall!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:42 PM
thank you!
George Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:12 PM
Such a balmy feeling, your haiku has left in me. Thank you Sara.....
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September 22, 2025 at 5:43 PM
color me grateful that my Haiku lifted you up and gave you that 'balmy' feeling. Thanks for your visit, hugs, Sara
Wolf Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 9:31 PM
Perfection. So soothing, Sara. Kudos, Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:43 PM
awww, thank you kind Gershon!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Lovely imagery! Hugs ~ Kim
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:43 PM
many thanks, Kim!
Gauthier Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 7:23 PM
sweet ~ lovely
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:44 PM
thank you, Line!
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