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DRIFTING

DRIFTING ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ cool night air scent of earth and pine the like lies still silvery moonlight spills thoughts drift like ripples “What does it mean to be alive?”
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Date: 8/25/2025 2:29:00 AM
So serene and contemplative, Sara The way the moonlight and drifting thoughts weave together feels both peaceful and profound.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/25/2025 6:27:00 PM
thanks, Rowena, for your beautiful observations about my poem, hugs, Sara
Date: 8/25/2025 1:53:00 AM
I wish I knew. This is a gorgeous haunting poem though. Keep the like lies still. I really prefer that to lake.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/25/2025 6:28:00 PM
I wish I knew, too, Ryan....much to contemplate. Appreciate your insightful and thoughtful comments, Sara
Date: 8/24/2025 6:20:00 PM
You typed "like lies stills" I think you meant "lake" ? Just being helpful. Dear poetess....it's beautiful. :) <3
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/25/2025 6:26:00 PM
oops, thanks for letting me know...appreciate your visit today, Paige, and for your comments.
Date: 8/24/2025 5:36:00 PM
Very peaceful and thought provoking ending. Well done. :)
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Date: 8/24/2025 5:26:00 PM
Beautiful feeling of serenity ~ L3 lake
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/25/2025 6:26:00 PM
awww, thank you!
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