Lena Townsend Poet Free verse

Drifter

Silence (sadness) interrupted by my thoughts of him (my drifter) 
his kiss so soft and sweet (like icing on a cake) eyes dancing (shining)by candlelight
colors of crimson (passion) and blue (serenity) surrounding us 
traveling and drifting (in his arms) to unexplored (familiar) places knowing (hoping) that 
forever (this moment) we are one 
praying for a lifetime (eternity) of waking to his touch 
the love of my drifter (a wonderful memory) forever



Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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James Peranteau May 19, 2009 at 6:40 AM What a fine example of infatuation Lolita ! I am the die hard romantic,..you stole mine heart ! Great poetry ! james

Sharon Winter May 18, 2009 at 3:43 PM Aww, so beautiful to cherish the incredible and everlasting memories you have. A capture here of pure lovers bliss. A rare connection. So swept away in this wonderful write. Love, Shar

John Loving Iii May 18, 2009 at 3:26 PM i'm thinking of something a little more permanent. jhl

Brian Strand May 18, 2009 at 7:56 AM Like the different styles in this one Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Brian Strand May 18, 2009 at 7:41 AM Thank you for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards May 18, 2009 at 6:53 AM This one sounds like a movie I've seen, such a love, rather sad, a wonderful memory. ~ good writing, Lena!~Carrie

Christopher Higgins May 18, 2009 at 4:34 AM This is beautiful my friend..I love the memory in the piece and love and passion that flows...good work.

James Marshall Goff May 18, 2009 at 4:25 AM understanding increased w/blog....very moving..... with (italics) playing a role of echo-reflection..... you have beautiful memories, Lena, with a poetic ability to allow us to share!!! thanks! and thank you for kind comments, Jim