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Drifted Deep

Drifted deep in wintry dark she's in decline, as useless as a sailboat in a storm. Once a haven for hikers, a shelter for stalwarts and strays till the mountains gave summons, now forlorn and disregarded, like a maiden aunt too old and to no purpose, though winsome in her former days when she was quite the prize, the belle of every ball, envied by all. "If those walls could speak!" they say as they quickly pass on by, never giving her a second glance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/29/2015 11:35:00 PM
The imagery is , well deep, very thought provoking Keith!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/30/2015 3:56:00 AM
Thanks Arthur... much appreciated! Keith
Date: 11/29/2015 11:14:00 PM
A sad piece from your pen here Keith yet with much truth attached..' a 7 indeed.!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/30/2015 3:57:00 AM
Yeah... that's me, the King of Sad! Thanks Joe. Best wishes, Keith

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