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Drift Away

let me toss and turn in poetic thoughts,
as words twist through countless breaths
and mingle across cotton candy clouds . .

- it's all in a day of poetry, my sweet butterfly -
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Theme~ All in a day
Just a little scribble

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Joseph May

Date: 4/10/2023 10:16:00 AM

This is just beautiful, love it, Hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/10/2023 5:02:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I'm drifting on the wings of a butterfly. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Bobby May

Date: 12/11/2018 12:39:00 PM

It maybe a short poem but it sure is captivating!! :-)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/11/2018 12:53:00 PM

:) Thank you Bobby. Sometimes less, is so much more. Your kind words bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/6/2018 2:31:00 AM

Beautiful. I like this. Thank you, Kai

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/6/2018 9:26:00 PM

Thank you Kai. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2018 3:36:00 PM

Your cotton candy cloud musings touched me sweet and tender, a gentle and touching wee gem for sure. Muse on - but keep pen handy (the difficult part for a poet who actively and constantly muses, sometimes at random.) A joy to read. All the best ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/30/2018 7:19:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. Thank you CayCay. You and your thoughts are appreciated. And my muse stays in the clouds, so- when she is ready to come out and play, I follow her lead. Thank you for your kindness. :) Brandy

Nancy Beckman

Date: 9/29/2018 9:59:00 PM

I like the line "cotton candy clouds". This is very clever! - Nancy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/30/2018 7:15:00 PM

Thank you Nancy. :) I appreciate your lovely comment. I am happy that you like clouds made of cotton candy. :) Me and my muse do as well. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/29/2018 7:29:00 PM

I have been tossing and turning in poetic thoughts but the words seem to be lost somewhere in the clouds. Beautiful poetry dear friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/29/2018 7:36:00 PM

:) And, that is perfectly okay for your words to get lost in the clouds. Poetry is made when thoughts meet, when they touch and gently collide. Thank you John for your lovely comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/29/2018 10:05:00 AM

I'm drifting, I'm drifting...on your poetic clouds...darn birds!...there getting in the way...lovely scribbles my cotton candy butterfly lol...love & clouds...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/29/2018 3:40:00 PM

Me, a cotton candy butterfly?? :) Perhaps!! I do enjoy lingering in clouds, those candy clouds of cotton. Hmm, that is almost a tongue twister. Lol. Keep drifting my Warrior with Wings, maybe the birds will finally figure out, that they need to fly South for the Winter. Sweetness & smiles. :) Brandy