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John 8:12 – “I am the light of the world. Whoever follows Me will never walk in the darkness, but will have the light of life.”

drift

drift, drifting, drifting
 away from shore's safe harbor ....
lighthouse, restore me

faithlifelightsenryu

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sara Etgen-Baker

July 8, 2026 at 4:33 PM

oh wow, such a powerful senyru! well done, Sara K.....sending hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

July 9, 2026 at 8:51 AM

I needed a hug today, Sara B., I am delighted you saw as powerful. Sara K.

Yann Rolland

July 3, 2026 at 12:12 PM

wonderful, i love lighthouses, and watch them as often as i can, leaving by the Sea, will remember this "outstanding" ? poem wishes

Sara Kendrick

July 3, 2026 at 12:17 PM

Your comment saying outstanding, Yann, is so encouraging. Sara K.

I Am Anaya

July 3, 2026 at 8:52 AM

The sense of doom & hope came upon me, Sara. I love the Bible verse as well! Blessings

Sara Kendrick

July 3, 2026 at 12:16 PM

Great to know this about you, Anaya. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K.

Ravindra K Kapoor

July 3, 2026 at 2:11 AM

Great lines and senryu depicting how in our we drift away by the stromes of life ? Then we see a light of hope or the light of God amid the roaring waves of sea which saves our faith? With best wishes always????? Ravindra K Kapoor

Sara Kendrick

July 3, 2026 at 4:52 AM

You totally understand, Ravindra. Thank you for your visit and kind review. Sara K.

Valsa George

July 2, 2026 at 9:48 PM

When we drift away from the shores of life, a lighthouse charts our way to safety. Quite inspirational.

Sara Kendrick

July 3, 2026 at 4:51 AM

Yes, Valsa, it is there all we have to is receive. Sara K.

Nette Onclaud

July 2, 2026 at 5:24 PM

i am charned by this uplifting senryu, sara!

Sara Kendrick

July 3, 2026 at 4:51 AM

Your visit is alway welcome, Nette. SK.

Howard Kerr

July 2, 2026 at 11:18 AM

Hello Sara, This superb senyru appeals to me at every human level. Your precise words say so much. I apologise for not lodging a comment at an earlier time. System Error on Poetry Soup the villain of the piece again. Howard

Sara Kendrick

July 2, 2026 at 12:21 PM

Those times when the system error notice occurs always is upsetting. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. I hope your poetry site is working perfectly today. Sara K.