Dressed For Success!

...for Juvie's 'moose'


Her moose is loose and wanderin',
her peace of mind he's squanderin',
if he don't get back here
sometime later this year,
she'll just hafta do her own launderin'!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 10:56 PM
Truly witty, Keith!
Docherty Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Smiles, this is sweet and funny! Well done Keith, Anna-Marie.
Gorelick Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 7:56 PM
Ok, I'm laughing..this is a riot.! BG
Haniff Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 2:45 PM
lol......ur cracking us all up with these limericks!....got a good laugh outta this one.....nice work as always....love n smiles Maryam
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 1:55 PM
You are crackin' me up....!
Crane Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Lol, you're crackers! Kx
Shango Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 7:41 AM
A powerful word play hangs my mind between fact of nature and artefact ... what seems to funny becomes poetic fact. Good write again.
Ginn Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 4:15 AM
Okay you're nuts and Im loving it. Do you have moose close to you, I think it'd be so exciting to see one wild. I guess that is according to your point of view. Reminds me of the children's book,,"If you give a moose a muffin". Fun write kid. Oh by the way KB visit the mail box~
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