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Dressed By Nature - Lune 1 For Contest

Crystal beads embellish
foliage until delicate zephyr winds
cast them adrift.


Lune 1 - Collum form lune 3,5,3,words
Contest – One Pretty Little Lune
Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

08~02~15

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Darren White October 16, 2016 at 11:45 PM That's a little gem, Jan :) HUGS!

James Fraser October 10, 2015 at 1:44 PM Beautiful Jan, love seeing leaves on their final journey. Even better when they dance on the breeze, for they rejuvinate from where they came - hugs//James xx Jan Allison October 10, 2015 at 2:21 PM I adored the image Andrea posted I'm really pleased she liked my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman August 17, 2015 at 12:14 PM This image is so pretty and delicate. Congrats on your win, Jan! Love, Kim Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thanks Kim I think this is one of my favourite poems of mine for its imagery - it makes me smile when I see it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 16, 2015 at 11:09 PM What a wonderful imagery Jan! Congrats on big win! Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 2:36 AM I'm really proud of this poem Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2015 at 8:46 PM Jan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Jan Allison August 17, 2015 at 2:36 AM Thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos August 16, 2015 at 7:49 AM ======================= Beautiful Photo, stunning words CONGRATULATIONS.... Jan Allison August 16, 2015 at 8:06 AM Thanks so much Judy I really love the image and the imagery too:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A August 16, 2015 at 1:35 AM Jan, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love Jan Allison August 16, 2015 at 4:57 AM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May August 15, 2015 at 7:48 PM Beautiful write Jan...Congrats on your win Jan Allison August 16, 2015 at 4:57 AM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani August 15, 2015 at 9:33 AM This is very elegant. Nice work. Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 9:36 AM Thanks Abdul:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance August 15, 2015 at 7:18 AM Great to see you on the winners list! Well done!! :) hugs Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 7:20 AM I'm so pleased Andrea liked it! Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus August 15, 2015 at 5:12 AM Always pleased to return with congratulations, Jan:) Most deserving, too! Hugs // paul Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 6:50 AM Thanks Paul I was really pleased with the way this poem turned out:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. August 15, 2015 at 1:18 AM Jan, congrats on your win:-)Alexis Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 3:54 AM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2015 at 1:11 AM Very beautiful, Jan! Imagery is a wow! Congrats in my contest. Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 3:54 AM Thanks Andrea - I loved this poem so much it was one of the ones I recently sent to Darren ... along with the cherry one I did for fun:-) thanks for a great contest:-) hugs jan xx

Etienne Lariviere August 6, 2015 at 3:36 PM quelle belle photo, quel beau poème, and such a beautiful poet aussi Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 4:10 PM Oh Etienne you are too kind:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy August 4, 2015 at 5:18 PM Jan, this poem is really beautiful. Janice Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 5:19 PM Guess you really liked it lol:-) hugs JAN XX

Janice Canerdy August 4, 2015 at 5:12 PM Jan, this poem is really beautiful. Janice Janice Canerdy August 6, 2015 at 4:47 PM Thanks for telling me that. Janice Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 3:15 AM The picture feature is only available to people who have Premium Membership:-) Hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy August 5, 2015 at 1:38 PM Yes, I did. Jan, how did you get the chosen picture to appear with your poem? Janice Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 5:19 PM Thanks so much Janice:-)

Irfanulla Shariff August 4, 2015 at 2:30 PM Marvelous imagery. Well done! All the best! Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 2:32 PM Thanks so much Irfanulla:-) hugs jan xx

David Mohn August 3, 2015 at 6:33 PM A real beauty Jan...sure to do well Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 6:34 PM Thanks David I do hope Andrea likes it:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France August 3, 2015 at 1:36 PM Jan, lovely for the contest, a real beauty 7 Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 1:39 PM Thanks so much Broken Wings I have seen some lovely entries Andrea will have fun judging this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton August 3, 2015 at 12:56 PM stunning imagery that enchants and enhances your words hugs 7 Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 1:29 PM Thanks Shadow:-)I tried hard with my imagery I hope Andrea likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler August 3, 2015 at 11:57 AM Lovely imagery that matches the photo. Spider webs are also spectacular primatic when dew drops on them. Have written a few poems about that. Best to you in the contest. / M Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 12:20 PM Thanks so much Maurice and I agree with you spider webs do look spectacular with the morning dew glinting on them - have taken a few pics myself:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2015 at 11:50 AM - So beautiful ~ a piece of jewelery of nature, dear Jan (7) - I wish you good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thanks Anne Lise I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford August 3, 2015 at 10:26 AM Oh, yes! loved it, Jan, It will do well in the contest. So fresh and different. Light as the morning dew. ~~Darlene Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thanks Darlene I tried hard with my imagery with this poem:-)hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen August 3, 2015 at 9:14 AM A beautiful write and a beautiful pic posted with it well done JAN.... Good luck in the contest..............A.M. Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 12:18 PM Thanks so much Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2015 at 8:58 AM ohh so mellow and pretty, jan... so finely done!.. huggs Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 12:18 PM Thanks Nette - I hope Andrea approves i tried hard with my imagery:-) hugs jan xx

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