Drear Year - Bt

Christmas comes soon; it will pass- bring New Year- first class! May this new start hold great bliss- the past year dismiss. Covid please go; with hope, mid-spring- please, vaccine rid. And bring sweet peace; help us cling fast- with new hope, sing! December 7, 2020 Contest: Bauk Than – Than Bauk Sponsor: Charles Messina
Rules: 3 lines per stanza: 4 syllables per line Rhyme 2nd syllable line 1 with 3rd syllable line 2 with 4th syllable line 3 (reverse of Than-Bauk form)
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Oh how we were all glad to be past 2020 even if it did not bring the end to covid, but it did end the beginning. Congratulations, Sandra!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 2:28 AM
Congrats on your expanded winner. Way to go. Sara
Messina Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:25 PM
Excellent Sandra. Congrats on your 1st place win!
Watt Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Nice flow and a good thing to wish for this Christmas, Sandra. Best wishes in the contest ~ John
Poteet Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:31 AM
This looks like a winner to me, very well constructed and I like the spaces between the verses. Merry Christmas and best of luck.
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