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Dreamy Skies

Again I'll close my sleepy eyes

                         Beneath the deep and dreamy skies

                         Again the moon, and twinkling stars

                           Mercury Venus, Earth and Mars

                           Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, swoon

                          The Milky Way, as does Neptune

                         And good ole' Pluto, that little guy...

                         Dance through space, the inky sky

                            And as I drift in slumber's rest

                          To rise at dawn upon life's quest

                        I'll rest in He Who made those skies

                           Lulled by The Father's lullabies

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Valsa George Date: 5/6/2023 10:38:00 PM A superb poem, simple and sweet ! Truly awesome. I wish to be that lucky child once again to be put to sleep by the great Father's lullaby! Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 4/1/2023 9:38:00 PM This is wonderful, BJ. I love it:) Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:06:00 PM Thank you Daniel, and thank you for reaching out. I'm back after my little hiatus during my contest and busy, busy family time!

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/1/2023 8:21:00 PM Lovely, lovely lullaby. Put it to music, and publish it, please! Wonderful! :) Gershon Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:11:00 PM Thank you Gershon :) I don't know if I'm that talented. I will ask my daughter if she may like to try, you bless my heart with your kind words :) My family used to love to come up with songs sung together, now many reside on the eternal side of this life, but I will ask my daughter to. Fun idea :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/31/2023 10:30:00 AM Ahh!! Reads like a good lullaby for a contest. I enjoyed reading this one today. It has good flow, rhythm, and rhyme plus shows your faith. Plus at first I thought you were going to talk about how those planets lined up on the horizon in the west right at sunset this week. It won't happen again until 2040. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my p age. Sara Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:14:00 PM Your words are so kind and uplifting to me Sara :) I have been off of here for quite sometime and just on to check on the contest, and it is so nice to be back here to read your sweet note to me. I hope you are well, I will be over to read some of your poems soon!

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/31/2023 4:45:00 AM A lovely poem BJ. So well written Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:15:00 PM Thank you Wendy :) <3

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/31/2023 1:05:00 AM t poem. Loved it. Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:15:00 PM Thank you Victor, it is so nice to be back on the soup tonight and read your kind comment. I will be over to read more of yours soon!

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/31/2023 12:01:00 AM Awesome, BJ:) i thoroughly enjoyed:) Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/6/2023 10:16:00 PM Thank you Jo, you are so sweet :) <3