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Dreamy Sea

Blue green beach
nature's sweet symphony
sand dollars thrown like roses on stage
the eyes of the audience in a captive trance
always a unanimous standing ovation
each mouth slightly parted and in awe
as the curtain sets on a
Dreamy Sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
Love your take on this, Congratulations.
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Date: 6/16/2014 3:07:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/15/2014 5:14:00 PM
Hi Melani, this is such an enjoyable piece to read. i love the incredible imagery and the use of personification. Bravo and congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/15/2014 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great write. Love Joyce
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:02:00 AM
Very creative write, Melani about the dreamy sea....a sea of dreams! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/15/2014 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful imagination comes alive wid ur lovely words Melani ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 6/15/2014 3:32:00 AM
nice imagery on the dreamy sea, Udaeta. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/15/2014 1:24:00 AM
Fine choice of the water of the body and fine win. Congrats, Melani
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Date: 6/15/2014 12:49:00 AM
Your poem is dreamy just like the title. Very nice, Melani. congrats in my contest.
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