Dreamy Sea

Blue green beach
nature's sweet symphony
sand dollars thrown like roses on stage
the eyes of the audience in a captive trance
always a unanimous standing ovation
each mouth slightly parted and in awe
as the curtain sets on a
Dreamy Sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Love your take on this, Congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 3:07 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 5:14 PM
Hi Melani, this is such an enjoyable piece to read. i love the incredible imagery and the use of personification. Bravo and congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great write. Love Joyce
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Very creative write, Melani about the dreamy sea....a sea of dreams! Congrats on your win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Beautiful imagination comes alive wid ur lovely words Melani ! Congrats on great win !
Chutani Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:32 AM
nice imagery on the dreamy sea, Udaeta. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Fine choice of the water of the body and fine win. Congrats, Melani
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Your poem is dreamy just like the title. Very nice, Melani. congrats in my contest.
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