Dreamtime

Bird at open window
Soft  Summer  rain
Leaf flickered teardrops
Life slipping down
To nurture the ground
As I sit here groping
Hoping to find
Wording of moment
To  picture in kind
How all is encircled
And loving entwined
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Brown Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Donald. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 11:51 AM
Donald - Congrats on having your poem featured this week - love the flow of this piece
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July 21, 2008 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations Donald on the featuring of your picturesque write "Dreamtime." Vince
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July 20, 2008 at 6:45 PM
Nice use of imagery in this uplifting piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 20, 2008 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations Donald on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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