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Dreamtime

Bird at open window Soft Summer rain Leaf flickered teardrops Life slipping down To nurture the ground As I sit here groping Hoping to find Wording of moment To picture in kind How all is encircled And loving entwined

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 7/22/2008 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Donald. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:51:00 AM
Donald - Congrats on having your poem featured this week - love the flow of this piece
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Date: 7/21/2008 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations Donald on the featuring of your picturesque write "Dreamtime." Vince
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Date: 7/20/2008 6:45:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this uplifting piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/20/2008 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations Donald on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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