Dreamt of Being a Star

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Pin on Greta Garbo

“Life would be so wonderful if we only knew what to do with it. ” Quote _Greta Garbo Greta Garbo, born poor- she was considered a weirdo; but Hollywood said- her acting skill we can tweet, because she has beauty ... even though she has huge feet! _____________________ December 16, 2022 Poetry/Clerihew/Dreamt of Being a Star Copyright Protected, ID 12-1509-188-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Poetry Marathon, Mile 23 sponsor, Mark Toney, Judged 01/04/2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/18/2022 1:51:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Seems I faintly remember her. LOL..Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2022 2:34:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the visit and comment, she is a long ago actress but I am reading her biography and her big feet was an issue back then, they never let the camera show her feet in films, I am sure nowadays, no one would care, blessings

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/16/2022 8:56:00 AM

Huge feet don't matter , bless all those kinds of feet that bring good news

Stephan McBride
Date: 12/16/2022 10:07:00 AM

Bless you, you have such a wonderful presence within you that spreads peace and joy, there is much to gain in just your reply that many could learn from

Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2022 8:59:00 AM

Stephen, thank you so much for the visit and comment. Greta sure did prove that big feet do not matter. Though born into poverty, she had big dreams, she just did not fit into the life she was born into. So she came to America to be a star. I am reading her biography and it is quite amazing what she accomplished in her life, blessings