Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Etheree

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July 7, 2023

Dreamscape

morn!
lovesick
Blue jay croons,
squirrels scurry
in haste for ever…
boisterous in grey coat.
breathtaking vermilion tinge
painting sky with glistening hue,
intoxicated July dreamscapes 
idyllic beauty of glorious  day!

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Valsa George July 13, 2023 at 8:13 PM Lovely description of the early morning.The poem abounds in colorful images of the squirrel, the jay and the blushing morning sky . Beautiful Etheree, dear Mala. All the Best.

Paul Callus July 13, 2023 at 9:44 AM Your Etheree poem teems with vivid imagery, Mala. Definitely intoxicating! ~ Here our temp is around 92F, and expected to get higher soon! I enjoy late afternoons when I water the plants! Regards // paul Malabika Ray Choudhury July 13, 2023 at 3:54 PM Thanks, Paul, for your kind visit, and inspiring comment. Canada is a cold country, our temperature almost never gets that high! That’s why we enjoy the idyllic beauty of summer. BW ~ Mala

Joseph May July 11, 2023 at 5:53 AM A beatifull description of a summer day Malabika, best wishes Malabika Ray Choudhury July 11, 2023 at 6:57 AM Thank you, Joseph. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment. Best wishes to you ~ Mala

Regina Mcintosh July 9, 2023 at 5:21 AM Love it - God bless you friend. Love, Gina Malabika Ray Choudhury July 9, 2023 at 5:47 PM Dear Gina, Thanks for your visit and kind comment. Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2023 at 2:23 PM I enjoyed your "Dreamscape" write. Have a blessed weekend............... Malabika Ray Choudhury July 9, 2023 at 5:46 PM Thank you, Dear Paula. Really appreciate your visit. Sorry, I am a bit occupied with another project. Love ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2023 at 11:23 AM Blue jays, grey coat, vermillion - colorful July! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 9, 2023 at 5:45 PM Thank you, Dear Kim. Actually it is raining a lot in Ontario. Really appreciate your kindest comment.

Eve Roper July 7, 2023 at 8:19 PM Great imagery with warm feelings, my dear. Hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury July 8, 2023 at 5:37 AM Thank you, Dear Eve. Your inspiring comments are truly appreciated!