Dreamscape

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July 7, 2023

morn! lovesick Blue jay croons, squirrels scurry in haste for ever… boisterous in grey coat. breathtaking vermilion tinge painting sky with glistening hue, intoxicated July dreamscapes idyllic beauty of glorious day!

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Valsa George

Date: 7/13/2023 8:13:00 PM

Lovely description of the early morning.The poem abounds in colorful images of the squirrel, the jay and the blushing morning sky . Beautiful Etheree, dear Mala. All the Best.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/13/2023 9:44:00 AM

Your Etheree poem teems with vivid imagery, Mala. Definitely intoxicating! ~ Here our temp is around 92F, and expected to get higher soon! I enjoy late afternoons when I water the plants! Regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/13/2023 3:54:00 PM

Thanks, Paul, for your kind visit, and inspiring comment. Canada is a cold country, our temperature almost never gets that high! That’s why we enjoy the idyllic beauty of summer. BW ~ Mala