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Poetry/Free Verse/Dreams Within Dreams/Human Written
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1687-735-19
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, November 19, 2024
For the contest, Dreams within dreams
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 11/21/2024

Sixth Place

I am dreaming and I am flying the wind is taking my sails across the ocean I love the awesome vastness the aqua blue waves cascading the crisp wind pushing my humble boat the azure sky above and the birds drifting and floating they are calling my name then, I am a bird sailing as dolphins leap high into the air full of freedom and bliss then, I am a dolphin leaping gliding, flying, flying, flying then, just a girl dreaming dream within dreams and dreams seeking my true north that place that has been calling to my soul I remove my heavy cloak of grief letting it fall away with the storm of life and I am dreaming and I am flying, flying then, I am a bright orange fish in the coral reef and I am the watcher and player in this underwater scene in this dream I partake and observe sailing, flying, drifting, floating then, I must leave my dreams and dreams to awaken to morning chirping birds once again a girl with dreams to unravel

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Date: 11/23/2024 7:46:00 AM
" I am a dolphin leaping gliding, flying, flying, flying" - A very powerful writing with many figures of speeches. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/27/2024 8:23:00 PM
Chris, thank you for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations ~
Date: 11/19/2024 6:17:00 AM
Dreams allow us to sometimes escape to beauty and wonderment, as you have written here Constance the beautiful imagery and wonderful experiences you describe resonate what I would love to do in the ocean and the visual beauties you experienced were lovely to see. Best wishes in the contest. I really enjoyed the beauty of this free verse this morning. It was a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for the experience and hope you are trying to do well. God bless...
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2024 10:01:00 AM
Michael, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment, God bless ~

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