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The waking world leaves me ne’r content My sweet if there’s no place for you and I To find ourselves, to love and ne’r repent To live, to love, to dream, and then to die Beneath the sky above this dreamful sleep I’ll find you there in hope or passions eye And pray you seek me well and find me deep Your heart content to love one such as I But if you find me not in slumbers womb And passions flame has not the chance to light Forget me not or to my early tomb This heart will surely break and rend the night Yet, sleep you well, my love my timeless muse And wait anon ’til morrow’s dreams pursue ~Christopher Thor Britt

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Date: 11/26/2013 6:27:00 AM
Nice win Chris, I enjoyed reading this again....Roger
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:14:00 PM
Christopher, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:44:00 AM
A favorite of mine of all time...I'd love to meet this muse!
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:45:00 AM
Christopher, I find your style to be smooth and flowing and a highly enjoyable read. Your work adds much to this site... Jake
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful words, beautiful poem. enjoyed. Sherese.
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Date: 10/28/2013 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
that's really good
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/24/2013 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Anne
Date: 10/23/2013 6:11:00 PM
Just beautiful! I love your classic style of writing! Wonderful work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...If you get a chance, you might like to read my poem titled, "Tears In Heaven". Your poem reminded me of it, so I thought that I would mention it...Thank you very much for the great comments, Christopher!
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/24/2013 10:22:00 AM
Thank you again for your kind words. I am excited to read your piece today.
Date: 10/23/2013 5:09:00 PM
My fav so far ;) Verse 1 is exquisite . [passion's eye] Congrad's on your WIN, Light & Love
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Debbie. If you have not already, please check your soup mail inbox. I dropped you a note. CTB
Date: 10/23/2013 3:08:00 PM
superb sonnet Chris congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Shadow. Very kind
Date: 10/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
Very fitting and eloquent verses for the contest. Congrats on the win
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Karen
Date: 10/23/2013 11:22:00 AM
Christopher, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Skat. I'm having a great deal of fun melding into the Soup community. Love ya back! CTB
Date: 10/23/2013 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic! Congrats on your win, Christopher!! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda
Date: 10/23/2013 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Christopher
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, sir.
Date: 10/23/2013 1:35:00 AM
So sooo beautiful!Im glad i got to read this sonnet.Giorgio loves sonnets..and this is a well deserved win Congrarts.Tnks for stopping by my humble verse.
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/23/2013 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Charmain... You too...Well deserved on your part.
Date: 10/22/2013 9:47:00 PM
nice win....PD
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/22/2013 7:13:00 PM
beautifully penned poem...you have a unique style...very nice, congrats on your win! :)
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 10/22/2013 6:09:00 PM
Very good poem Chris. I enjoyed it
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 10/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Roger.

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