Home » Poems » Andrea Dietrich » Dreams Unleashed

Dreams Unleashed

Your dreams unleashed -reality - 
for someone else - remain a dream.
A craving caged we cannot see.
Your dreams unleashed -reality.
The dreams of wise, bold souls soar free
while dreams imprisoned weakly gleam.
Your dreams unleashed -reality -
for someone else - remain a dream!

lifetriolet

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2012 4:51:00 PM

Alot of unleashing going on...Congrad's on your win! Light & love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/11/2012 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2012 1:25:00 PM

congrats Andrea on a fantastic write and win luv.. enjoy the HM..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2012 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/11/2012 9:07:00 AM

Wow, I like the triolet form. The repetition pushes certain lines without over doing them. Congratulations.

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/11/2012 2:11:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea!!! on your win...well done! ahh to dream...so wonderful...well done my friend...love deb

Erich Goller

Date: 2/24/2012 9:15:00 PM

I love to dream,dream almost every night, A lovely story poem,nice in form.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/22/2012 9:44:00 AM

Hmm very thought provoking write on dreams, Andrea-- I really liked your repeating lines here and it could definitely hold so true for so many people... I hope your day will be good :) hugs to you :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 8:53:00 PM

no...i'm being happy dandy in my comment... i explained about my poem..cause..Nathan, hates it... he tells me.. my work is at it's worse... really he does... he hates all my new poems..i think he is just jealous... what do you think... soup-mail

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 8:40:00 PM

oooo..I want in on this contest... But, i heard she is a tough judge... well i still want in... and about *THE LEPRECHAUN* poem... it was a joke.. and a poem i created for my kids... they enjoyed it.. Or maybe she wants this kind of goodness... all my stuff is FREE FALLING... like right off a building... l al la l al la... good luck in the contest...always..pd

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2012 8:37:00 PM

sweet dreams! lol

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/21/2012 2:30:00 PM

Enjoyed the way you unleashed this dreamy piece Andrea..)

Jack Horne

Date: 2/21/2012 2:22:00 PM

I was looking forward to this one as soon as I saw it was a triolet - love this form and must use it more. Yours is beautiful and meaningful, as ever. Yes, I've probably written about the old tree a lot - it's near my home and it's always fascinated me. Some guy murdered (stabbed) his nephew under it in the 17th century, apparently. People often wrongly call it the hanging tree - at least, there's no record of anyone being hanged from it.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/21/2012 12:30:00 PM

I am too old to be bold - body asleep in the deep. Good write - great insight. Win the contest, ya hear? Love, daver

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/21/2012 11:18:00 AM

Imprisoned thoughts of yesteryear. Remind us that we live in fear. To scared to reach up to the stars. Stuck in a dream of fancy cars. Life is for the one's who live it. Pain is for who can't forgive it.

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 2/21/2012 5:56:00 AM

Very well done! An excellent write that I'm sure will be in the top of the contest:)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 2/21/2012 2:25:00 AM

Thanks for placing me in your winner's list Andrea. I have not done a triolet before. Your entries are always in the AAA rating like this one! I wish you luck. Love Dalila

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/20/2012 10:25:00 PM

A great triolet, Andrea. I am really trying to write a good one but keep failing miserably. I guess with practice, I will get better. At least I hope. You are the master! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2012 8:42:00 PM

excellent work Andrea.. u took this one really to a new level of creativity and just luv the form.. good luck with this rare beauty luv..

Johnny Sumler

Date: 2/20/2012 7:01:00 PM

Wow Andrea...what a touching triolet. You seem to amaze me with your beautiful delivery of meter and verse. A very excellent entry and a magnificent use of repetition in this form.