Dreams Unleashed

Your dreams unleashed -reality - for someone else - remain a dream. A craving caged we cannot see. Your dreams unleashed -reality. The dreams of wise, bold souls soar free while dreams imprisoned weakly gleam. Your dreams unleashed -reality - for someone else - remain a dream!
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Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Alot of unleashing going on...Congrad's on your win! Light & love
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win! Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:25 PM
congrats Andrea on a fantastic write and win luv.. enjoy the HM..
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Wow, I like the triolet form. The repetition pushes certain lines without over doing them. Congratulations.
Burch Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations Andrea!!! on your win...well done! ahh to dream...so wonderful...well done my friend...love deb
Goller Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 9:15 PM
I love to dream,dream almost every night, A lovely story poem,nice in form.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
K. Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Hmm very thought provoking write on dreams, Andrea-- I really liked your repeating lines here and it could definitely hold so true for so many people... I hope your day will be good :) hugs to you :D
A   Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:53 PM
no...i'm being happy dandy in my comment... i explained about my poem..cause..Nathan, hates it... he tells me.. my work is at it's worse... really he does... he hates all my new poems..i think he is just jealous... what do you think... soup-mail
A   Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:40 PM
oooo..I want in on this contest... But, i heard she is a tough judge... well i still want in... and about *THE LEPRECHAUN* poem... it was a joke.. and a poem i created for my kids... they enjoyed it.. Or maybe she wants this kind of goodness... all my stuff is FREE FALLING... like right off a building... l al la l al la... good luck in the contest...always..pd
Culverhouse Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:37 PM
sweet dreams! lol
Maverick Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Enjoyed the way you unleashed this dreamy piece Andrea..)
Horne Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:22 PM
I was looking forward to this one as soon as I saw it was a triolet - love this form and must use it more. Yours is beautiful and meaningful, as ever. Yes, I've probably written about the old tree a lot - it's near my home and it's always fascinated me. Some guy murdered (stabbed) his nephew under it in the 17th century, apparently. People often wrongly call it the hanging tree - at least, there's no record of anyone being hanged from it.
Austin Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:30 PM
I am too old to be bold - body asleep in the deep. Good write - great insight. Win the contest, ya hear? Love, daver
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Imprisoned thoughts of yesteryear. Remind us that we live in fear. To scared to reach up to the stars. Stuck in a dream of fancy cars. Life is for the one's who live it. Pain is for who can't forgive it.
Mitchell Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Very well done! An excellent write that I'm sure will be in the top of the contest:)
Agtani Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Thanks for placing me in your winner's list Andrea. I have not done a triolet before. Your entries are always in the AAA rating like this one! I wish you luck. Love Dalila
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February 20, 2012 at 10:25 PM
A great triolet, Andrea. I am really trying to write a good one but keep failing miserably. I guess with practice, I will get better. At least I hope. You are the master! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 8:42 PM
excellent work Andrea.. u took this one really to a new level of creativity and just luv the form.. good luck with this rare beauty luv..
Sumler Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Wow Andrea...what a touching triolet. You seem to amaze me with your beautiful delivery of meter and verse. A very excellent entry and a magnificent use of repetition in this form.
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Such a fine write Andrea word perfect to the readers , best of luck in the contest , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
Sivey Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:52 PM
What an unleashing here Andrea! I love the triolet form, and you did so masterfully! I love your poem my friend! Great Work!!
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Very good Triolet with insightful lines.This should do good in the contest Andrea.Best wishes.
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February 20, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Always at the top of your game Andrea. Nothing short of a lovely cup of poetic soup from your soul. Luv Michael
Babcock Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Dreams unleash many truths and for some it is only a dream--so true. love phyl
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