Dreams Take Hold

Dreams Take Hold


When Gods evaporate
men take possession
of their thoughts
walking hand in hand
with all 
when we dig within
outward hate dissolves
illusions erased
one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Man Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Arthur, your deep thoughts leave me in a muse. You have a beautiful mind!
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October 18, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Is it okay to say that made me laugh?
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Deep thinking here...reminds me of the song Personal Jesus
Solomon Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:20 PM
I bow to you, sir! Nicely put, Jesus! Now what did you do with Arthur?
Hinshaw Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:46 PM
A very insightful message, Arthur - my kind of poetry. Glad you enjoyed the Gods Seventh Day write. As always, thanks for your support and encouragement - Bob H
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:53 PM
the title pulled me in Art! thought provoking piece:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 1:29 AM
spiritual poem, drift away...
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