Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Couplet

Dreams Or Reality

The warm tingle down my spine, tell tale signs of a slight tan.
Freckles burst forth as flowers do, is it a dream or is this how I am?

Rolling down the grassy knoll, paddling in the stream.
Daisy chains loop round and round, or is this all a dream?

Running jumping like the deer, nuzzling softly on your chest.
Will I wake and find in fear, Tis not you, but just a dream at best?

To separate dreams from reality, this is hard to do.
Because my reality is a dream, when I am with you.

© 27 /05 /2013 

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Ralph Sergi June 18, 2013 at 11:23 AM My reality is a dream when I'm with you. Beautiful irony. Bravo! Raplh Sergi

Carrie Richards June 4, 2013 at 12:14 PM This is such a beauty........what a warm and endearing poem, Mandy. I think this is one of your best! Loved it!

Bl Devnath June 3, 2013 at 1:44 PM The last line is very nice to feel. Thanks....,loved always,bl

Justin Bordner June 2, 2013 at 2:37 PM Sweetness in simplicity Mandy - to think that everyday life was once like this pretty write for most people on this planet,; then economic 'progress' intruded - J.A.B. %

Jack Horne June 1, 2013 at 3:44 PM awww, lovely, Mandy. congrats on your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2013 at 3:23 PM a sweet one, Mandy. A bit like how I did mine!

Suzanne Delaney June 1, 2013 at 12:48 PM Beautiful last line,Mandy We all hope to be 'Living the dream.' Good luck in the contest, my dear. SuZ

Dr. Vandana Sharma June 1, 2013 at 5:30 AM lovely...

Shadow Hamilton June 1, 2013 at 5:21 AM Hi Mandy good luck in contest this should do well fine write Shadow

Richard D Seal May 30, 2013 at 10:47 AM Ooooo I love the,' is this how I am', I think maybe we are all a little this. Great write Mandy, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

Jancarl Campi May 28, 2013 at 6:02 AM This was a sweet poem. I like the last two lines best. Ciao, Jancarl

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2013 at 12:29 PM awwh, this delicate one makes me drool, mandy.. good thing, the contest ended before i could post mine as this surely will hit the top!... welll done..:) huggs

Harry Horsman May 27, 2013 at 10:45 AM you are back to your very best with this, Mandy,,, just love it,,

Barbara Gorelick May 27, 2013 at 7:18 AM Sweet, I enjoyed your dream. BG

Connie Gildersleeve May 27, 2013 at 6:27 AM I love this kind of dream. In this case it would be wonderful if it were reality. Nicely done Mandy, I enjoyed the image conveyed. Warm Smiles, Connie

Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 5:39 AM Awww Mandy! :) Sweet!!! :) Glad you're happy!