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Dreams Or Reality

The warm tingle down my spine, tell tale signs of a slight tan. Freckles burst forth as flowers do, is it a dream or is this how I am? Rolling down the grassy knoll, paddling in the stream. Daisy chains loop round and round, or is this all a dream? Running jumping like the deer, nuzzling softly on your chest. Will I wake and find in fear, Tis not you, but just a dream at best? To separate dreams from reality, this is hard to do. Because my reality is a dream, when I am with you. © 27 /05 /2013 Contest entry:

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Date: 6/18/2013 11:23:00 AM
My reality is a dream when I'm with you. Beautiful irony. Bravo! Raplh Sergi
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Date: 6/4/2013 12:14:00 PM
This is such a beauty........what a warm and endearing poem, Mandy. I think this is one of your best! Loved it!
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Date: 6/3/2013 1:44:00 PM
The last line is very nice to feel. Thanks....,loved always,bl
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Date: 6/2/2013 2:37:00 PM
Sweetness in simplicity Mandy - to think that everyday life was once like this pretty write for most people on this planet,; then economic 'progress' intruded - J.A.B. %
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:44:00 PM
awww, lovely, Mandy. congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:23:00 PM
a sweet one, Mandy. A bit like how I did mine!
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Date: 6/1/2013 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful last line,Mandy We all hope to be 'Living the dream.' Good luck in the contest, my dear. SuZ
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:30:00 AM
lovely...
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:21:00 AM
Hi Mandy good luck in contest this should do well fine write Shadow
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Date: 5/30/2013 10:47:00 AM
Ooooo I love the,' is this how I am', I think maybe we are all a little this. Great write Mandy, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:02:00 AM
This was a sweet poem. I like the last two lines best. Ciao, Jancarl
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Date: 5/27/2013 12:29:00 PM
awwh, this delicate one makes me drool, mandy.. good thing, the contest ended before i could post mine as this surely will hit the top!... welll done..:) huggs
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Date: 5/27/2013 10:45:00 AM
you are back to your very best with this, Mandy,,, just love it,,
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 AM
Sweet, I enjoyed your dream. BG
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Date: 5/27/2013 6:27:00 AM
I love this kind of dream. In this case it would be wonderful if it were reality. Nicely done Mandy, I enjoyed the image conveyed. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:39:00 AM
Awww Mandy! :) Sweet!!! :) Glad you're happy!
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