Dreams of You

Come and share the night, for I am sleepless
in wide-eyed dreams of you and only you.
With all your charms, you lure the farthest stars
to gather near me, brightening my view.

Awake with you, my eyes have touched the sky,
each shooting star, the moon and Venus, too.
In sparkling dust, as evening embers glow,
I ask a timid dawn to bid adieu.  

For if you leave come light, I’ll blame the sun,
If robins sing, then I will blame them, too,
and if come dawn, I finally fall asleep, 
my dreams will be of you and only you.


Written 6/13/20 for Carolyn Devonshire’s
Sleepless Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/17/2020 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I love your last line, "my dreams will be of you and only you." That will make one fall asleep. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Your comments are so kind. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/17/2020 2:45:00 AM
This is so dreamy, soothing and mesmerizing Rhonda. It feels like a lullaby of love when read at night. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi, for your beautiful comments! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 3:31:00 PM
Nice imagery you have conjured up for your writing of insomnia with lovely celestial references and a 'dreamy' ending. Congrats, Rhonda!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, John! You always have such lovely and insightful comments. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 2:42:00 PM
I just knew Carolyn would love this as much as I did. I am happy to see it honored with a deserving First Place win Rhonda! Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, so appreciated! You had more confidence than I did...Blessings to you, my friend, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 1:29:00 PM
This was beautiful Rhonda. Congrats on your first place finish.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! Nice to have you back and sharing your talented pen with us. Hope you and your family are safe and well. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 1:09:00 PM
Outstanding writing, Rhonda. Your entry stayed on my mind all of last night. Great flow and vivid imagery! Congratulations on your first place win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/18/2020 4:10:00 PM
I just want to add that the last verse is one I'm committing to memory. It's so romantic!
Date: 6/15/2020 7:35:00 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
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Date: 6/14/2020 8:01:00 PM
Pure, genuine bliss of a write! I think Carolyn will absolutely love it, Rhonda. See you in the Winner's Circle! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
Focus on the Big Dipper and may your dreams come true! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:20:00 PM
Very sweet dear friend. I enjoyed your verse. Love to you and blessings too, Gina
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Date: 6/13/2020 11:21:00 PM
Rhonda, Sweet dreams. -Richard
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Date: 6/13/2020 9:44:00 PM
Beautiful, dear poet
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Date: 6/13/2020 8:17:00 PM
This is gorgeous Rhonda! Carolyn will love it. Poems that include nature are my favorites. xxoo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/18/2020 4:11:00 PM
You were right, of course! What a beauty Rhonda has here!
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