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Dreams of Gold

of piles of money dreamed I, gathering into my bosom GOLD, lovingly... All misspent, all lost that vast fortune, squandered on this and that, HEAVEN'S rejects

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/28/2019 4:41:00 AM
The ending is classic! Makes the whole poem sit up and pay attention.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2019 10:10:00 AM
Whoa. Haven't heard that phrase -- 'sit up and pay attention -- in 50 years or so. That said, it really works well. Thanks for reviving it for me. :) gw
Date: 6/26/2019 4:36:00 PM
It all depends how you use the money doesn't it Gershon? Love your ending my friend! : ) xxoo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2019 4:59:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and support, Connie. Much appreciated. And, of course, you're right. Money put to good use is real gold. :) gw

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