Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Blitz

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Dreams Notwithstanding Rhyme

DREAMS NOTWITHSTANDING RHYME


Shape a picture 
Shape your dreams  
Dreams catcher
Dreams chaser
Chaser is fast
Chaser is slow
Slow runner
Slow track
Track of the costs
Track of the times
Times to rise
Times to land
Land mines
Land white
White power
White magic
Magic tricks
Magic charm
Charm  down the skies
Charm  under the stars
Stars twinkle
Stars are blind
Blind to a lover's fault
Blind to justice poke
Poke him in the nose
Poke him in the ribs
Ribs of the lungs 
Ribs that fool
Fool for you
Fool to believe
Believe in luck 
Believe to God
God is good
God is love
Love at first sight
Love amidst  war
War against disease
War against the odds
Odds of survival
Odds of winning
Winning ticket
Winning team
Team player
Team efforts
Efforts and time
Efforts that rhyme
Rhyme with chords
Rhyme that sounds
Sounds
Chords
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** down under the sky and down under ME

08:55 pm, August 26, 2015

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Sara Kendrick September 12, 2015 at 8:50 AM Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman September 8, 2015 at 8:32 PM Well done, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 23, 2015 at 2:58 AM thank you so much Kim.. =`)

Skat A September 8, 2015 at 8:59 AM Awesome Olive, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT** Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 5:19 AM thanks much Skat.. =`)

Eve Roper September 7, 2015 at 6:43 PM Fabulous write, Olive, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:29 AM thank you so much Eve.. =`)

Debbie Guzzi September 7, 2015 at 4:00 PM Always the healing hand our Olive! Thanks so much for sharing and I enjoyed the levity in the verse POKE 'im in the ribs! Congrad's Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:22 AM I always try to bring healing Debbie.. thanks much, i also like that line.. :D~Olive ELoisa

Alexis Y. September 7, 2015 at 9:07 AM Olive, congrats on your win:-)Alexis Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:21 AM thank you Alexis.. =`)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 6, 2015 at 11:32 PM Superb winning write dear Olive, big congrats! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:20 AM thank you so much Dr. Upma.. =`)

Paul Callus September 1, 2015 at 2:53 PM Excellent write, Olive_eloi, even though I am not in a position to comment on the technical side since I have never written a Blitz. But the content and smooth effortless flow are worth noting! Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 3, 2015 at 10:00 AM Paul, it should make the reader a little breathless though.. :D I had a hard time writing this.. this my second try.. my first is : Far through times.. thanks.. hugs!!!!

Emile Pinet September 1, 2015 at 7:22 AM Truth displayed openly for the perusal of the world. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 3, 2015 at 5:51 AM thanks much Emile.. =') glad for your drop by.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2015 at 6:01 PM Great job, Olive. I still don't know if I should even try this one! I admire you for doing one! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2015 at 8:29 AM try it Andie.. :D! nothing to lose.. :D

Verlena S. Walker August 27, 2015 at 10:08 PM Nicely done Olive... Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thank you so much Verlena.. =')! Glad for your drop by.. =')~Olive Eloisa

Sara Kendrick August 27, 2015 at 5:42 PM Reads like a winner..Admirable that you gave God glory in your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 30, 2015 at 2:04 AM thanks much Sara.. =')!glad for your drop by too.. :D

James Fraser August 27, 2015 at 1:08 PM Wow, not easy to script, but the flow is wonderful. Need to be brave and write to this form myself. Well done little one, hugs//James xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 29, 2015 at 5:48 PM Thank you so much James.... =`) i really just tried this form.. this my 2nd try to this form... maybe im just inspired... =`)