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DREAMS NOTWITHSTANDING RHYME Shape a picture Shape your dreams Dreams catcher Dreams chaser Chaser is fast Chaser is slow Slow runner Slow track Track of the costs Track of the times Times to rise Times to land Land mines Land white White power White magic Magic tricks Magic charm Charm down the skies Charm under the stars Stars twinkle Stars are blind Blind to a lover's fault Blind to justice poke Poke him in the nose Poke him in the ribs Ribs of the lungs Ribs that fool Fool for you Fool to believe Believe in luck Believe to God God is good God is love Love at first sight Love amidst war War against disease War against the odds Odds of survival Odds of winning Winning ticket Winning team Team player Team efforts Efforts and time Efforts that rhyme Rhyme with chords Rhyme that sounds Sounds Chords ______________________________________ ** down under the sky and down under ME 08:55 pm, August 26, 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2015 8:50:00 AM

Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/8/2015 8:32:00 PM

Well done, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/23/2015 2:58:00 AM

thank you so much Kim.. =`)

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 8:59:00 AM

Awesome Olive, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/28/2015 5:19:00 AM

thanks much Skat.. =`)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2015 6:43:00 PM

Fabulous write, Olive, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 2:29:00 AM

thank you so much Eve.. =`)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2015 4:00:00 PM

Always the healing hand our Olive! Thanks so much for sharing and I enjoyed the levity in the verse POKE 'im in the ribs! Congrad's Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 2:22:00 AM

I always try to bring healing Debbie.. thanks much, i also like that line.. :D~Olive ELoisa

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2015 9:07:00 AM

Olive, congrats on your win:-)Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 2:21:00 AM

thank you Alexis.. =`)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/6/2015 11:32:00 PM

Superb winning write dear Olive, big congrats!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 2:20:00 AM

thank you so much Dr. Upma.. =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2015 2:53:00 PM

Excellent write, Olive_eloi, even though I am not in a position to comment on the technical side since I have never written a Blitz. But the content and smooth effortless flow are worth noting! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/3/2015 10:00:00 AM

Paul, it should make the reader a little breathless though.. :D I had a hard time writing this.. this my second try.. my first is : Far through times.. thanks.. hugs!!!!