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"dreams In Dreams"

The cracks in the ceiling can't hold back the unseen... Mirrored fragments dropping slowly, to me its just a dream... Ageless whispers through the night, in my ears they hum a song... Trampled desires and distant promises were never really that wrong... So I dust off this paper to give it essence and a purpose to this life... Where my thoughts can lay and swim free and one day take flight... The days will pass and the story told of man who found his heart... But as this journey undertakes ,some will be left or just fall apart... I lay on my bed and watch the ceiling fan spin,as the clock ticks away... My eyes shall close and I will dream in black and white with clearer words to say...

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Date: 9/11/2010 10:14:00 PM
A wonderful poem Michael, it reminds me a little of the things we should cherish before they die off or leave. A man alone with his thoughts, I wonder how much passion or comfort he is ready to give. When he has to face the new moment. If only that ceiling fan could spin reverse, and give meaning to the promises and desires. ANd free any mans heart to feel the emotions that flow. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:19:00 PM
An interesting dream poem, Michael. So do you dream in black and white then?
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Date: 9/10/2010 9:36:00 PM
Wow! It would be so difficult to highlight the best part for me in this piece because every line has got impact. I really love, "the cracks in the ceiling cant hold back the unseen" enjoyed this while listening to the birds this morning.. Love Wilma
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