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For: H Form - Hybronnet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

You are made of dreams I had forgotten long ago when perhaps I was foolish, and quite naive, still young enough to wish upon fleurs in a field not yet trodden, and asking favors from a shooting star; I grew up waiting answers from afar. I chose a road of curiosity and sweet adventure traveling solo lest I become encumbered and so slow that mundane life would gain velocity, leave me in a mire of ordinary; so it did when I became unwary. Now suddenly you reappear: my dream, my wish, my favor from a shooting star.

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Date: 10/1/2024 7:13:00 AM
Chetta, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the image, Constance
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Date: 9/22/2024 4:16:00 AM
I have read your winning work that placed in Constance's contest. Congratulations on being there. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 9/16/2024 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/story with a pretty picture. Dreams of old or new can be wonderful. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Chetta Achara
Date: 9/16/2024 5:58:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/30/2024 3:15:00 PM
That opening line is so beautiful and the whole poem flows so perfectly. Perhaps now the time is right . Only you will know. SuZ
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/30/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thank you.

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