Dreams Die In Obscurity

Love can feel like an uphill race, yet, win or lose, you can't abstain. And only time can ease the hurt of a heart hollowed out by pain. Fledgling wings clipped by betrayal can't take off in pursuit of truth. And every cut gets less discreet, as they harden the hearts of youth. When reality gets revealed, Hope defends the lies love clings to. And as happiness disappears, life seems surreal and untrue. Tears hide behind a mask of smiles, concealing the pain you're feeling. And yet, you feel devastated, for broken hearts require healing. Tempted by sexual urges, innocence lost its purity. And so, in this uncaring world, your dreams die in obscurity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Strong and rich imagery, Emile. "only time can ease the hurt of a heart hollowed out by pain." How true that life seems so dark without love and "anger hardens hearts of youth."
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you so much Line, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Dunn Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Love your comment that you left for me, Thanks alot, it was a great pick me up, your poem is very heart felt and profound it is full of deeply emotional meaning, glad I stopped by to read it, cheri
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Cherl, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Laurie Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:37 PM
G'day Emile... it is a pleasure to read a such well written and rhymed poem Emile - thank you - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Lindsay, your warm friendly words are much appreciated. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Angst-ridden write but beautiful as always. 7
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thanks Nandita, your visits always pick me up. Emile.
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