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Dreams Become Real

Dreams Become Real when I was small I sailed a paper boat, made from shiny red Christmas paper left over and tucked away, inside I drew a picture, heaven in blue Crayola. as I worked the bees hummed from flower to wild clover I hummed too Dorothy’s song although there was no rainbow I wanted there to be a place that was happy and magical my boat would know the way.

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Date: 7/28/2018 3:53:00 PM
I feel the shining spirit of youth in this little gem Patricia. So sweet! : )
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Date: 6/19/2018 8:25:00 AM
Where ya bin dear Patricia... never mind, you're back! Kissy Kissy, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 6/17/2018 1:21:00 PM
Welcome back indeed! I entirely agree with the Silent One - wonderful poem!! All my very warmest regards...as ever, Patricia. :) john
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Date: 6/17/2018 11:23:00 AM
Hi Patricia, welcome back... Lovely poem..
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Date: 6/16/2018 6:47:00 PM
Really enjoyed this simple (but not so "simple") dream.
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Date: 6/16/2018 6:44:00 PM
Hmmm lovely! Smiling. xomo <3
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Date: 6/16/2018 2:48:00 PM
Very sweet Patricia :) I enjoyed this.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 6/16/2018 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.

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