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Dreams Aroma

Aroma of long-held dreams ethereal tomes of longing beyond understanding with grip on soul velvet twine soft but tight tug of inner tides drawing closer on mystic winds of cyclical time wrote our story on snow at night an opus lost today THIS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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Date: 12/30/2023 9:29:00 AM
Dearest Lasaad! Your words, in this form, flow like water in a lyrical waterfall creating images with impact. The basic theme is so creative - the aroma, perfume, scent of dreams it could only come from creative energy, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/21/2023 3:33:00 PM
This form guided me and engaged pulling the meaningful words into my psyche visually. Very unique and well crafted.
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Date: 12/19/2023 8:23:00 AM
Not come across this form before Sotto but I love the way it flows so eloquently hugs Shadow
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Date: 12/18/2023 12:22:00 AM
An interesting format, Lasaad. However, did you come by these, intriguing properties? Brevities goes without mention, my friend. My quill will be on overtime well spent, I must say, thank you. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:05:00 AM
Very creative form, well written, my poet friend. Bill
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Date: 12/17/2023 7:18:00 AM
Your "Dreams Aroma" is a creative write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day...................
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Date: 12/17/2023 5:00:00 AM
Your creativity shines in every form you write, my friend. Your mastery of this Brian's favorite form sprees in long held dreams, as you say. You don't need good luck to win, your pen does that for you, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/16/2023 6:56:00 PM
Wow, dear Sotto, this open verse poem is absolutely stunning in its vividness and how impeccably you've woven depths here, in a gorgeous way ~ I agree with Sara, this is nothing less than 'magnificent'.. I recently discovered this form and was intrigued to try but now seeing yours has left me in awe.. "longing beyond understanding with grip on soul velvet twine soft but tight tug of inner tides drawing closer" Such soulful and heartfelt feelings have been infused here! Truly profound, love this
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Date: 12/16/2023 4:45:00 PM
Magnificent and creative are the first two words that came to mind when reading your poem. I am not familiar with this form but I love the rhythm of it. These words resonated with me: ethereal tomes of longing beyond understanding. You continue to wow me...thanks for sharing your poetic voice and creativity. Have a pleasant evening...Merry Christmas, too. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 12/16/2023 3:44:00 PM
This is so creative Sotto, jeweled words that follow each other exquisitely, Merry Christmas Blessings to you and yours :)
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Date: 12/16/2023 3:38:00 PM
Oh such a lovely poem Lasaad!Debx
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Date: 12/16/2023 1:21:00 PM
Lovely feelings in this.... enjoyed!
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Date: 12/16/2023 11:28:00 AM
- A lovely verse, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - (sorry I don't commet so often .... my PC "lives its own life" ... difficult to use ... I need a new one ) - hugs
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Date: 12/16/2023 11:22:00 AM
You formatted this differently and I think the sponsor likes that.. your poems is a most poetic selection of words and I wish you all the best in the contest..
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