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Dreams Aroma


Aroma 
of 
long-held 
     dreams

ethereal
    tomes 
of 
   longing  
beyond 
   understanding 
with 
  grip 
on 
 soul
   velvet 
 twine
soft 
but 
tight
   tug 
of 
    inner 
tides
drawing 
    closer
on 
  mystic 
    winds
of 
  cyclical 
        time
wrote 
our 
    story
on 
snow
at 
   night 
an 
  opus 
lost 
 today

THIS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/30/2023 9:29:00 AM

Dearest Lasaad! Your words, in this form, flow like water in a lyrical waterfall creating images with impact. The basic theme is so creative - the aroma, perfume, scent of dreams it could only come from creative energy, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Blessings! Happy New Year.

Karen Jones

Date: 12/21/2023 3:33:00 PM

This form guided me and engaged pulling the meaningful words into my psyche visually. Very unique and well crafted.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/19/2023 8:23:00 AM

Not come across this form before Sotto but I love the way it flows so eloquently hugs Shadow

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/18/2023 12:22:00 AM

An interesting format, Lasaad. However, did you come by these, intriguing properties? Brevities goes without mention, my friend. My quill will be on overtime well spent, I must say, thank you. Aloha, William

Bill Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

Very creative form, well written, my poet friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/17/2023 7:18:00 AM

Your "Dreams Aroma" is a creative write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day...................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/17/2023 5:00:00 AM

Your creativity shines in every form you write, my friend. Your mastery of this Brian's favorite form sprees in long held dreams, as you say. You don't need good luck to win, your pen does that for you, Lasaad.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/16/2023 6:56:00 PM

Wow, dear Sotto, this open verse poem is absolutely stunning in its vividness and how impeccably you've woven depths here, in a gorgeous way ~ I agree with Sara, this is nothing less than 'magnificent'.. I recently discovered this form and was intrigued to try but now seeing yours has left me in awe.. "longing beyond understanding with grip on soul velvet twine soft but tight tug of inner tides drawing closer" Such soulful and heartfelt feelings have been infused here! Truly profound, love this

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/16/2023 3:44:00 PM

This is so creative Sotto, jeweled words that follow each other exquisitely, Merry Christmas Blessings to you and yours :)

Deb M

Date: 12/16/2023 3:38:00 PM

Oh such a lovely poem Lasaad!Debx

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2023 1:21:00 PM

Lovely feelings in this.... enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2023 11:28:00 AM

- A lovely verse, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - (sorry I don't commet so often .... my PC "lives its own life" ... difficult to use ... I need a new one ) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2023 11:22:00 AM

You formatted this differently and I think the sponsor likes that.. your poems is a most poetic selection of words and I wish you all the best in the contest..