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Dreams and Reality

When I awoke from dreams I'd made at seventeen, I will look around....and what I see is how swiftly autumn came to be The countless years have come and gone, and still I long for all those dreams The many schemes, now tinged with blue, a bit askew, construed regrets, So futile yet…but they linger near My eyes were wide with expectation, when youth was mine, at seventeen I never had a solid clue what path, direction I would go Yes, I did have plans and dreams and schemes I would touch and teach and rush to change the world, the way no others could I'd make an impact in the chain... My offerings would light the dark I would be heard, I'd leave a mark, a brighter spark A legacy would be my life No matter the pain, or the sacrifice _ Of course my life had other plans I stayed, on course…like others do My dream turned into sanity… Those youthful schemes had sincerity, I see them now with clarity What I've learned since then, makes sense to me Some things are simply meant to be Those dreams became a family… My offerings have changed the world, in grander ways I do believe... My children came, one, two, and three, I never dreamed of dreams so real Supreme adults, they are today And that is why my heart is full How dreaming dreams, can still come true and often is in fact, the true, remarkable reality….

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Date: 6/8/2013 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations!!! CARRIE, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:37:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:03:00 PM
In the end we all do what we can aye? And what is of importance to the world is purely a matter of individual perspective ;). Congrad's on winning through round one. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:30:00 PM
wonderful Carrie, my main dream was always a husband a home and a child and now all but 1 have come and gone and soon I will leave this house too. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on an outstanding win with this wonderful write expressing the dream theme of the contest ..luv that title too..
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:00:00 AM
A beautiful piece of introspection Carrie. Well done and congratulations
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win. This is encouraging, that we can make our dreams come true.
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:41:00 PM
hey Carrie, congrats on a very well deserved win, David
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:29:00 AM
I'm so glad this placed high. Probably the most enjoyable and relatable one in the contest. congratulations!
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:20:00 AM
This made me smile, Carrie-- isn't it amazing how things unfold and somehow along the way, we see the bigger picture and realize how everything just falls into place? I really enjoyed your take on the challenge, of how your dreams turned into something else, a definitely worthy reality :) Wonderful way to take us along that journey of your dreams! Super duper congrats on your win :D! & thank you very much for your inspiring words! Yup, I do have some other meanings in my poems that I put in :D
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Date: 8/27/2011 10:37:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win with this magnificent poetry on dreams ... luv..
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:48:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for the 2nd place win in the contest~~this is an amazingly well-deserved win~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Dream On" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2011 6:28:00 PM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on your second place win. Lee
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Date: 8/27/2011 4:45:00 PM
Loved this. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2011 1:56:00 PM
An awesome write and I agree with Andrea. You are a gifted poetess and you have raised 3 adults which takes a lot of work. This is going into one of my fav. love phyl
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Date: 8/26/2011 9:42:00 PM
an awesome outlook on your contribution to the world, Carrie and don't forget the POETRY!! This is sure to rank high in the contest!
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:43:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Carrie. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration. Love, Carol
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