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Dreams Adrift on Silken Tides Premiere Contest Winner

Written: November 24, 2024 for contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann __________________________ In a calyx of ambivalent dreams, where shadows swirl as silken strands, I slip through the surface, a sailboat in a tide of thoughts, where colors speak in whispers, and sounds weave a tapestry of guffaw and sighs. I am an astronaut, zipping into a cosmos of canorous clangor past comets with names such as chimera and planets blooming with a corpulent deluge simmering under layers of desultory dust, each a sun waiting to ignite an encomium spark. Footfalls on the ledge of splendor, swirling in circles, a kaleidoscope of moments — jumping from the quicksilver of a fleeting glance, to the deep sinkhole of silence, where time slows to the pulse of heart. Here, on this canvas of perception, the boundary of self dissolves, melting into the esoteric ocean and excruciatingly eviscerated thoughts are squid jauntily joined by caring currents, amber-colored fires dancing on the horizon, unraveling secrets hidden in their stings. I chase shadows, those swift-painting phantoms, a ghostly gap in gnarled grooves of life, seeking sincerity in a swirl of sights — the stillness of awareness, longing wrapped in vibrant coils, darkness stitched with fragile threads of light. In stillness, I stroll. feeling every pulse evolve into a quilt of colors. tracing trails tracked by supple notions. as the clock spins dizzy tales — my pen touches the sky, gathering glimpses in gradients of glides. a jaunt laced with lingering layers. charting caverns of concealed aspirations. where wisdom blooms in wild gardens, Inviting all intrepid inclined to intrude the twinkling, tantalizing tones of existence, endlessly entwining every exhale an echoing essence. of something that yearns. to be liberated and let loose.

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Date: 12/6/2024 8:32:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, full of depth and emotions. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Date: 12/5/2024 3:14:00 AM
A standing ovation for this great poet who has scripted such a wonderful poem. No exaggeration, this is a marvel. Beautiful word choices and uninterrupted flow of thoughts. I love every line. A whimsical journey when "self dissolves, melting into the esoteric ocean and excruciatingly eviscerated thoughts" ... you are indeed a sailboat in a tide of currents and an astronaut sailing past comets. This goes into my FAVE. Hearty Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 12/4/2024 9:10:00 PM
'I stroll in stillness feeling a quilt of colors' your poetry flows like the expensive cashmere silk dear poet. so very rich. Congratulations on your top win. You rule the words. Blessings & cheers.
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Date: 12/4/2024 8:40:00 PM
...to the deep sink hole of silence.... ....as the clock spins dizzy tales ... .... where wisdom blooms in wild garden.. :..... the twinkling tantalizing tones.... BIG CONGRATS to in TOP
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Date: 12/4/2024 5:39:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, wonderful poet, I adore when "colors speak in whispers". Your poem is rich with creative imagery and intriguing metaphors, sprinkled nicely with alliterations. A beautiful dreamy journey. Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:17:00 PM
As always another one of your brilliant poems with excellent metaphors and seamless alliterations, love the wordplay here and especially how you’ve written “ as the clock spins dizzy tales — my pen touches the sky, gathering glimpses in gradients of glides. a jaunt laced with lingering layers. ” how profound and well written! I love the idea of the pen touching the sky! As it somehow gives imagery that fits the prompt theme very well! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes
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Date: 11/27/2024 1:31:00 AM
Your poem is full of excellent imagery and metaphors. It is a journey of inner battles, especially regarding dreams and self-reality. Great poetic flow.
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Date: 11/25/2024 2:28:00 PM
What a muse adrift there! "amber-colored fires dancing on the horizon, unraveling secrets hidden in their stings." That is original. So many gifts in your words-
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Date: 11/24/2024 12:40:00 PM
- Sounds so peaceful and interesting, Las - A special mood in your lines... beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/24/2024 12:37:00 PM
Your Poetry Lasaad is superbly written. Truly impressive my friend. Such a creative and intellectual ability you have to create and transform your messages into the thoughts we read from you. A poetic style that you have mastered that a few of us can achieve. Your passion is always shown in your writings. Your words and thoughts reflect that. You were born to write and are among the very best on this platform. A favorite piece my friend for me. God bless you...
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Date: 11/24/2024 12:42:00 PM
PS also I want to say that when I read your comments on other Poets Poem's you are spot on in your analysis. You can cut through the complexities of some of these poems, and deliver a perfect assessment of the writers thoughts. If I have a problem understanding I always read your comment and it helps me understand better. Much respect for your intellect my friend...

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