Dreams

Escaping from hands As petals in windy day Dreams flow in distance

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/21/2018 10:54:00 PM

Exquisite ink! I know I'll think of this the next time I look for one of those elusive dreams :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/22/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Maureen.

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2018 8:28:00 AM

Grerat haiku Nayda..

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/21/2018 5:55:00 PM

Thank you SO.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2018 7:32:00 AM

Dreams have a way of being elusive..very well articulated!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/21/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Vijay.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/21/2018 4:58:00 AM

It's a beautiful Haiku Nayda. All the best my friend

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/21/2018 6:07:00 PM

Thank you Arturo.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/20/2018 11:52:00 PM

WOW! EXCELLENT.Hugs

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/21/2018 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Anisha.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/20/2018 9:46:00 PM

Oh an absolutely beautiful Haiku Nayda, expressed with delicate imagery of dreamy beauty. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/21/2018 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Susan.