Dreams

Lay with me, take my hand. We can leave this place together, only you will understand. Soaring away, just me and you. Through the night sky, we may even ride a shooting star or two. Forget the struggles of this complicated thing called life. Feel the cool breeze in our hair, as we glide through the night. So lets go, right now. Remember, just you and me. Lets see the places some only dare to dream.

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Carissa Marie

Date: 5/9/2017 3:50:00 PM

This particular piece is a lot more positive than the last few and it is GORGEOUS. By far your best thus far; the others were incredible, but this poem makes me feel light and happy. I hope the speaker and whomever he/she is addressing get to fly and talk of their dreams; this work truly makes me hope. I love this. Thank you so much for sharing! <3

Laken Smith
Date: 5/9/2017 4:48:00 PM

thank you for the kind words! I wrote this to encourage people to always shoot for the stars and never give up on their dreams. The sky is the limit and we still have so much more to discover beyond that.