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The sun rose fireball red Then splashed of tangerine A miraculous work The one of which I dreamed No canvas can contain A pen's ink can't measure The dream held at night Close as lover's breast In daylight remote When gray clouds oppress Giving trees a coat Beauty dissolves Wind and cold_ chill Sunlight captures Love's quiet stilled A cloud breaks Sunlight beams Hope returns Sun sets Yellow Grand

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Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2015 7:19:00 AM

Sara, a lovely sunrise, your painted a picture with words, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, Oh Why, The Pain of Night Dreams with your thoughtful comment, much appreciated . . .

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 7:55:00 AM

Your lines are so alive and real. Munching them in my mind is the blessing I am receiving this moment. This is such an excellent share and I really do not know what more to say. A 7 definitely

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/27/2015 7:42:00 AM

Fantastic colors and images. Love the image of sunlight capturing the wind and cold....now that is hope.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/26/2015 3:16:00 PM

Dear Sara, This is an amazing Diminishing Hexa Verse. I am simply charmed by the vivid picture of your dream you have painted turning your pen into a paint brush. Love and good wishes. -Mohammad

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/26/2015 5:59:00 AM

Amazing pictures, and wonderful words. Also one of my fav topics, for I do enjoy the way our sun effects our lives. Well done.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2015 12:09:00 PM

how impressive, sara.. for me, you evoke a sense of tranquility... great piece!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2015 10:49:00 PM

So dreamy, yet passionate like that orange yellow sky! I hear you were the only one to do this form correctly.. It sure does look good to ME.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2015 7:22:00 PM

I so love your positive attitude & fireball red is fantastic! The photo works excellent with the verse. Light & Love

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/24/2015 10:01:00 AM

I do agree with Paul you write and paint at the same time.A painter's poem. A dream poem indeed.God bless you Sara. Your friend Rajat

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2015 9:08:00 AM

I love this Diminished Hexaverse, Sara; your pen writes and paints at the same time! Beautiful!! (sticking to your principles:)...good for you lady!) #7 // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2015 6:40:00 AM

- Beautiful, both in pictures and words - I wish you a lovely weekend, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/24/2015 6:31:00 AM

your words uplift the photo Sara a stunning pen hugs 7 + fav

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/24/2015 6:31:00 AM

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