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Dreams

The sun rose fireball red
Then splashed of tangerine
A miraculous work
The one of which I  dreamed  
No canvas can contain 
A pen's ink can't measure
The dream held at night
Close as lover's breast
In daylight remote
When gray clouds oppress
Giving trees a coat
Beauty dissolves
Wind and cold_ chill
Sunlight captures
Love's quiet stilled
A cloud breaks
Sunlight beams
Hope returns
Sun sets
Yellow
Grand

feelingsnaturediminished hexaverse

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Constance La France

March 6, 2015 at 7:19 AM

Sara, a lovely sunrise, your painted a picture with words, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, Oh Why, The Pain of Night Dreams with your thoughtful comment, much appreciated . . .

Funom Makama

February 6, 2015 at 7:55 AM

Your lines are so alive and real. Munching them in my mind is the blessing I am receiving this moment. This is such an excellent share and I really do not know what more to say. A 7 definitely

Monterey Sirak

January 27, 2015 at 7:42 AM

Fantastic colors and images. Love the image of sunlight capturing the wind and cold....now that is hope.

Mohammad Yamin

January 26, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Dear Sara, This is an amazing Diminishing Hexa Verse. I am simply charmed by the vivid picture of your dream you have painted turning your pen into a paint brush. Love and good wishes. -Mohammad

Scott Thirtyseven

January 26, 2015 at 5:59 AM

Amazing pictures, and wonderful words. Also one of my fav topics, for I do enjoy the way our sun effects our lives. Well done.

Nette Onclaud

January 25, 2015 at 12:09 PM

how impressive, sara.. for me, you evoke a sense of tranquility... great piece!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2015 at 10:49 PM

So dreamy, yet passionate like that orange yellow sky! I hear you were the only one to do this form correctly.. It sure does look good to ME.

Debbie Guzzi

January 24, 2015 at 7:22 PM

I so love your positive attitude & fireball red is fantastic! The photo works excellent with the verse. Light & Love

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 24, 2015 at 10:01 AM

I do agree with Paul you write and paint at the same time.A painter's poem. A dream poem indeed.God bless you Sara. Your friend Rajat

Paul Callus

January 24, 2015 at 9:08 AM

I love this Diminished Hexaverse, Sara; your pen writes and paints at the same time! Beautiful!! (sticking to your principles:)...good for you lady!) #7 // paul